章 26: Darkness Needs Light Rewrite
I have just finished the rewrite and published it all again. The structure is mostly the same, i just added and deleted certain parts.
Some of the main concern with this fan fic was that Rey and kylo seem to be moving too fast. While I agreed and fixed a lot of it they still continue to have a very rapid relationship and I decided to keep this aspect because of how powerful their connection to each other is.
I also didn't have a ton of time to complete this so it's basically the same as the first time just better written with more dialogue.
Thank you for reading and I hope those who choose to reread this will enjoy it. :)
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