Danmachi: Elurian Myth

LV 13

ABEXUS

despite the score, it's a good read for an extra afternoon if you're bored with a good mc. of course, due to how many chapters there are parts of the story and characters do get skipped or forgotten. however, if you are looking for a non-harem danmachi story, this is right up your lane with a fast but satisfying conclusion. it's no masterpiece, but for a fanfic, it's fun enough to get invested in.

LV 1

Guionista

The story was generally good, though it had some negative aspects like confusing fights, the little impact the main character made despite his actions, and certain boring, monotonous moments that made you want to skip parts. However, overall, it was enjoyable and pleasant to read. What really made the story worse for me was Bell. For many reasons, every time he appeared, the protagonist would turn into an NPC or someone unrecognizable. I was already frustrated by this when I first read it, though I still managed to enjoy other parts of the story. Even so, every appearance of Bell reminded me of these negative points, to the point where I started skipping his scenes. As I write this, I realize that even in another recent moment, the protagonist becomes useless just so Bell can shine once more, which ends up being frustrating. Despite all this and a few other details, the story is good if you can overlook these points. -------------------- Overall Rating: 4.0 Writing Quality: 5 (There are more words written in some places, but it's not much or I just skipped it I don't know, maybe 5) Stability: 5 (the story was completed the same day) Story Development: 3 (originally was a 2 because it mostly followed the same path and for other reasons, but continuing the story beyond the Level is a plus for me) Character Design: 3 (would have been a 4 or 5, but the protagonist and Bell bring down the score—the protagonist for the reasons I mentioned before, and I can explain more if you’d like) World Background: 4 (the story goes beyond canon, although it wasn’t deeply explored, but I don’t consider this too important).)