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Raiden Ambrose was not a man of the Shinobi World, instead, he came from our world. Planet Earth. Looking wistfully out of the class' window he remembered the day that all of that changed...
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What Customisation System is this?! Isn't this that Photoshop System from that Novel?!
*Based on the system from Custom Made Demon King but it does change, after all, this is custom made Fiction god not demon king lol. *
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The volume 1 was really, I’m witing the vol 2 with impatience. I like that not every thing goes the way of the mc and that Konoha is just another shinobi village who is as bad as the others.
there is nothing wrong, just i recommended read and add this to library it has good plot [img=exp] [img=exp] [img=exp] [img=exp] [img=exp]
the story starts off going really well being reborn in konoha before the war was a good idea. I was unsure about the idea abusing chakra as a resource that will run out. I think it would have been better to have a separate energy source. about the death and reincarnation into Pokemon it felt like you really just wanted to rewrite. if you wanted to rewrite your story you probably should have just done that instead of invalidating the naruto world like it didn't even matter. I get it could be considered a character setup. but it should have been set up with a character arc like this before he was reincarnated like he was betrayed died and woke with a need for power so it would never happen again .
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overall my taste i think the way the plot goes is pretty good as well i would say more but im too lazy just accept 4.2 stars ...............,
ok this is what i've been looking for!!it was so hard to look for the same novel as Custom Made Demon King and now i'm finally here but there isn't enough chapters!Author san pls work on it ASAP!
I think the shinobi world shoud have a continuation. so 3.2 stars rating for now. I didn't see the other tags so I was disappointed when he reincarnated to another world so yeah that's about it.
The story is by all means has a a great development and logical explanation and reasoning. Not to forgetting the author doesn't follow all the simple mindset of most who write fanfic and even shows a gravity of situation the MC finds himself in from the falls to rise. Something that is normally missed by most new authors but anyways point is Great story 😎👌👌👌🤞
It's pretty good I wouldn't say the best Fanfic but Good Writing Quality is good Stability of updates is good I guess Story development is Pretty Decent Character design Why the fok is this here World Background is pretty good and it makes sense not some like oh it's so good nothing bad ever happens like those hero mc's you know I hate hero mc's in fanfic's because they don't think straight in most fanfic's and I could go on for hours okay now let's stop my rant and say the final word's it's just good like the Universal Villain (new version) so author keep up the good work muk backwards is C*m
Good beginning keep it up , as I have seen lot of Fanfics either dropped or put on indefinite hiatus. Well just my suggestion do not make the character being just in few more chapters if you are planning a long fanfic as it just becomes boring .
story is great till chapter 10. before that it is immersive af. my main criticism is on the ra*e of the child and the fact that the mc got done in the way he did. like ya really did minato and the rest pretty fkin dirty by putting the mc in that situation, it just felt really forced. i am not marking down anything on the rating due to the fact that it IS your story, and it would be unfair to mark ya down just cuz the story changed too much for my liking 😅 no hard feelings author-sama, i just couldn't stand the fact that the mc got removed/killed off like that... or that the village turned on such a powerhouse who obviously cared for konoha (from at least his actions)
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Clearly the author didn't plan anything and just writes as he went along. Most of the five-star reviews are from the same person, Grigrait. 8 reviews with only emojis.
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point 1: The MC is a slave to his system. point 2: It's extremely melodramatic for no reason, other than oh I tried to be kind but I got hurt so now I'm gonna be an edgelord, who causes pain destruction, and suffering. point 3: The MC is a naive idiot who doesn't plan things out at all. point 4: It feels like because the author didn't properly think out how a shinobi world would work, he says **** it and blows up taking lord third with him, when he could have very tried to plot it to where he 'fakes' or escapes the village out when he's doing a war mission/mission, or even more so, being extremely average to the point where he fades into obscurity until he's properly strong enough. And by doing so he could properly grow stronger. Point 5: Him having to get rid of his emotions in order to 'get stronger' because emotions are apparently a human/mortal way of thinking. This fails because, how are you going to tell a proper story of a 'being' without emotions? It's impossible to do so because the author's emotions are still going to be in his or her own writing therefore the whole no emotions thing is irrelevant and unnecessary drama. Listen if you want to make a tragic/psychotic mc that does what he does because of the kindness he previously had that's fine, but if you're trying to make no emotion that's going to be hard because then you'd have to write in an extremely logical way of thinking for the mc, in which mind you this is a fantasy story.
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