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Cultivator in the MCU

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作者: Phoenixrd

3.94 (23 レビュー結果)

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A avid wuxia novel and mcu fan reincarnates into the mcu with a cultivation manual, how will the course of the movies change with his interference.
(This is my first attempt at writing anything I hope to get better as this goes along)

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Brian70707

Terrible dialogue, not a very bright mc. Dropped when that conversation with some zombie happened. Had high Hope's and they crashed and burned

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Munchnax

Keep it up author and don’t give up midway!!! 140 characters

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Be_n
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The story is all over the place, sometimes he's at Asgard and the next he's fighting those aliens that invade NY with no good explanation on how he got there. I dropped it when he got all angry over Agent Coulsen's death, like he didn't know it was coming. It said in the beginning he was an avid Marvel fan.

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Depressed_Panda

Didnt like it. It could've been much better. I thought it was going to be a decent fanfic but it turned out to be horrific. Even then I'll come and check your fanfic out cuz I like your idea. Well we'll see if you've improved

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iceguy
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just some basic op reincarnation due to rob shenanigans. also this should be in the fanfic area. i wish people would at least do better character insertion just make them a original inhabitants why do you always need them to world hop there

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Darcksage

Giant walls of text, headache inducing. No editing.

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Joyce_ntare

Not bad😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔

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Joyce_ntare

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Phoenixrd

Shameless author self review. Still learning how to write and I hope that as I slowly progress through the story that my writing should get better and better as I go.

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TheRandomGuy

what I mad about this novel is the way MC act without thinking about the consequences of playing with the butterfly effect and the way that he cultivate doesn't get any struggle like the real wuxia novel.

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Saiyan_Of_God

UUUUUUUUPPPPPPPPPDDDDDDDDDDDDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Where is the UPDATE???????!!!!!....................................................................,............

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starking

thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

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echoplasm

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Ehenrique

Texto é uma manifestação da linguagem, uma mensagem usada para transmitir informação de um autor para um leitor. Um texto é uma manifestação da linguagem. Pode ser definido como tudo aquilo que é dito por um emissor e interpretado por um receptor. Dessa forma, tudo que é interpretável é um texto.

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Tim_Barney

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Immortal_Sun_Wolf

Okay honest review here the whole idea was amazing but story it' self isn't the reason. 1: Everything is rushed, the story is developing to fast. 2: MC doesn't interact with other characters much 3: MC fucking didn't change a thing in MCU until Avengers first move. I haven't read after that. Okay something would like to tell. 1: Make the paragraph of only about 5-7 lines and that all a try to write dialogue in different lines. If you author has done writing this story once try writing it again and then give it to your all I will support you. Aside from all that can only say A for effect but just write this story again for only two times as I said earlier and this story will be top MCU fanfic

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aaelite1

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starking

thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

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Hydra1OO

This story really had me from day 1. This is a new author that is diving deep into his cultural. He does with great dialogue that flows into an immersive story. I really hope he finishes this story and gives us more. 5/5

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