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Cultivation PC: I Became Stronger By Downloading and Installing Data

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作者: EvilisMyNature

3.26 (21 レビュー結果)

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Liu Xin had just transmigrated into the body of a pitiful cultivator who had not only been expelled due to a small accident but had also been killed by his own clansmen.

Liu Xin, who had just bought his new computer, was really furious as he didn't get the chance to use it.

But just after a moment of transmigration, he found out that his computer had transmigrated with him and had become his system.

[Cultivation PC]
[Motherboard: Liu Xin (Lower Qi Refining Level)]
[Processor: Divine Sense (1 GHz)]
[Operating System: Dantian {CultivateOS} (Version 1.0)]
[RAM: Perception (128 MB)]
[Storage: Sea of Consciousness (256 MB)]
[Graphics Card: Spiritual Perspective (Integrated 1.0)]
[Sound Card: Divine Hearing (Integrated 1.0)]
[Network Card: Data Processing (Integrated 1.0)]
[Software: 5]

...

He went to the cultivation store.

[Spiritual Palm (2 MB)]
[Origin Breathing (10 MB)]
...

At the alchemy store.

[100 Ways to Refine a Pill (4 MB)]
[Alchemy for Beginners (2 MB)]

At the forging and array store.

[Guide to Forge a Weapon...]
[Basic Knowledge about Arrays...]

...

Downloading cultivation, array, and forging data didn't take long for him to be perfect at his realm, with a wide collection of techniques.

Talent in forging? Talent in martial arts? Talent in alchemy? Talent in arrays?

What? Do I need talent if all the data is deeply imprinted in my soul?!

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Read this novel, and let me know how is it.

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    Someone_Or_Other

    Writing quality: atrocious. The mistakes are minor, but there are a *lot* of them, to the point that it’s hard to parse and get involved in the story. The author should at least run spellcheck and a pass through grammarly; it’s better than the nothing that he does before pasting his rough draft in. Update stability: 1/5. The story went on ”hiatus” before even hitting 40 chapters and his other story went on that same hiatus at only chapter 4. So I won’t harbor any hope of this one coming back anytime soon, either. I would rate this lower if I could, but the scale only goes down to 1. Story development: feels rushed, and the MC’s cheat is the cheatiest cheat that ever cheated. That makes it hard for anything but a bog standard wish fulfillment story to be written. But with the short chapters, that also makes the wish fulfillment … difficult, to say the least, as it doesn’t allow for proper buildup of practically anything. Character design: stale and cliche. There is nothing outstanding about any of the characters introduced other than their artwork, and even that is AI generated. That said, however, that the author even did that for his characters shows that he actually cares (or cared? I have a feeling this is a dropped project) enough to go that extra mile. So at least he tried. World background: practically nonexistent. Readers are given almost nothing to go on but overused tropes, and the short chapter length again bites the story in the butt here as there’s just no way to cram world building, plot, character development, and wish fulfillment into chapters this short. Overall: give this a pass. It really isn’t worth your, or my, time. I don’t regret having read it and I hope this review helps the author do better on his next story, but this one should just be taken out back behind the wood shed and … let’s say, “retired”.

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    AllDango

    Não sou bom com avaliações mas gostei bastante, e, embora não seja algo que alguém ponha em uma crítica, infelizmente não vou poder continuar a ler pois a webnovel proíbe que eu veja por navegador, como sou brasileiro, sem chances, não sei falar bem inglês e tentar ler sem um tradutor, realmente me faz desistir, porém, achei sua história divertida e espero que continue, até.

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    MrFoolishReader

    Writing quality- 3/5. It is readable, but there are minor grammar mistakes. Updating stability- I do not know how many chapters he will upload per week, but right now he has updated two chapters today. I assume he will upload more during this week, so - 5/5. Story Development- 5/5. The story so far is very good, just gotta work on conversations along with refining the character’s’ personalities. Character Design- 5/5. I love the mc, he isn’t overly kind so as to always save the weak (meaning he isn’t all hero type), nor is he a villain that sets out to destroy everything. A good neutral character, I personally like it! World Background- 3/5. Not much information to go by, author-san should work on world building, introduce new places, give descriptions of the world, add more detail to the world background, etc. For now, it will be at 3/5, I might change my mind later on and raise this review to 5/5, but for now: 4.2/5 ⭐️ So far, it is a great novel, I really recommend giving it a read.

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    Rohan_Shinde_2731

    It is novel with great potential, I like it 👌

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    Ctrlkris

    This book is not an original but a copied book from one of the trial read books, that's why I rate it so low but I will read it for now since they have not yet released the original trial read one.

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    Aman_Shaikh_9232

    The story could have been good but the author just haaaadd to make it bad. it was excellent till the point where his 'senior sister' comes , she just simply overpowers him , who has a cheat and is one major realm ahead , simply saying that he doesn't have any battle experience when it is clear that he just started cultivating and criticizes him for that , like how do you expect him to have any battle experience when his first battle real battle is against you. and how the heck did she even get that level of combat experience.It was clear that she and another had been at the sect for years but were only at late stage qi refining and mid stage foundation realm resp. but then after just two weeks MC came to sect they jumped to mid stage foundation and low stage core formation. The sect master (also there master) once said that MC'S cultivation speed was monstrous as even genius from top grade sect would require at least a month with a lot of resources to reach form mid stage qi refining to late stage qi refining . and that was qi refining , Author simply FORCED their development and cultivation and he did it without giving any sort of reason at all ( at least explain something even if it is total nonsense such as some pill of fortuitous encounter or at least even some life and death battles) but he did nothing .Final conclusion ,Don't Read , it's a waste of time

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    mao_zi

    this whole thing is an inferior carbon copy of a trail novel , while i wouldn't complain if it was actually done better but no it fails in every aspect from the writing to the world building or the lack of thereof . i wouldn't recommend this to anyone even for time passing you would probably have more fun staring at a wall.

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    Weeb_Deku

    liked the concept, it has good potential keep updating 👍

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    Overdrive_Titan

    increase update stability and world background, I will increase stars. That's all.

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    Slushy_Apollo

    This novel is copy pasted from another novel with very slight differences like names or places

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    TheFluffyWhiteFox

    Increase number of chapters Author.at least double chs per day.

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    Y_Maverick

    If you can ignore the borderline rap*, almost forced romance and the PC constantly taking over his body then it’s a decent read.

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    SweetnessSaintess

    Need More Need More Need More Need More Need More Need More 😍📖💗😍📖💗😍📖💗😍📖💗😍📖💗😍📖💗😍📖💗😍📖💗😍📖💗😍📖💗😍📖💗😍📖💗😍📖💗😍📖💗😍📖💗😍📖💗😍📖💗😍📖💗😍📖💗😍📖💗😍📖💗😍📖💗😍📖💗

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    Rajendra_Prasad_3537

    It's a outright plagiarism which is really appalling, don't read it it's not worth it

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    Karl_Queflander

    complete plagiarize from another trial novel from a few months ago.

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    Wopeh
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    It was my free reading book so I read it. There were only 56 chapters I could read. It shouldn't have been a free reading book with so few. Anyway, not terrible. Liked the overall story. Might read more later, might not. One thing that bothered me was MC got a monkey blood pet than like three chapters later it disappears and is never mentioned again. Seriously one sentence is needed to be added to confirm it's outcome. "She noticed the monkey and killed it." I assume that's what happened otherwise she let it watch them do it then just left it in the cave.

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    primal_vampire

    is there a harem......................................................................................................................................

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    IntrovertedWriters

    its not that bad to be honest. I like the story.

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    NovelLover1423

    I very much like this keep up the great work author although i would prefer to know more about the world but i like this

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    ApoloSilver

    The concept seems good to me Good luck on this journey, let's see where you will take us dear author ^^

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