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Crownless King System

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作者: ESH

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The Crackle. An event that happened milleniums ago gave the humans superpowers as magic and mutations. But so it did with all the fauna across the Earth.

Creatures that were on the myths walk now on the surface of the Earth. Heroes that were on the pages of books and on screens of movies and series became real.

Adventurers are the profession of the millenium. Idols, singers, streamers, dancers, reality shows, everything is around them.

Archer left his family to follow his dream of earning his life slaying monsters. The drama begins when some different happen on his Awakening process.

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    ESH
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    No greater changes were made yet so I suggest you to read the First Chapter till the end or just the end of it. Thank you for the trust and see you soon.

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    NikTitanik866

    There are a lot of problems with this novel. Words are constantly misspelt and even left out. The flow of the text is confusing, often switching from one line of thought to the next without a visible connection. It feels like the Author is just steamrolling through it all. Character design is also pretty lacklustre because the characters have no defining trait you can see, only the ones that are told to you which makes them lack credibility. Anyhow, if the grammar is fixed and a more fleshed out background is provided this could reach 3.8.

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    Xiaoru
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    I'm totally confused by this novel . There are so many problems . It took me huge deal of patience to read until chapter 8. The dialogues are written in a wierd way that they becomes confusing . Random things jump in between a plot ! Its a good story but it should be written properly so that reader understand what the author is trying to potray !

    3yr
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    ESH
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    This is a self reflexion about the whole. Taking all the scores into consideration for newcomers. The writing is very bad and I'm trying my best to improve it slowly. I'll do a rewriting after finishing the first volume. The Stability is a mess and this is totally on me. There's ups and downs I'm a human after all. So I'll try to keep it going. I really enjoy writing this story. Story development is something that I only saw how rushed is now that I'm writing this review. I'll try to improve. Character design is severely lacking. I'll start working on it and enhance it when editing. The world didn't even had its full shown on the novel yet till the 90th chapter but I'm giving some exclusive chapters to other character to increase the immersion. I think this is about it for now. On the whole I really like that so many people ignore my bad proficiency in English to just enjoy the content. FOR YOU ALL MY THANKS AND SEE YOU SOON.

    3yr
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    theyasuke_

    bad writing quality, but I guess the story isn't too bad if you're patient, I believe the author can improve and hope he does, good luck with all your endeavors author.

    2yr
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