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Crossing The Twilight the Awakening

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作者: Roberto_0461

3.44 (10 レビュー結果)

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This fanfic is based on over 18 to 20 other fanfics that I have found interesting but a few very good ones that were never finished, I must write one of my own and since I have a lot a time on my hands, hope to finish by the end. I have read and researched all those fanfics and added what I thought was missing in them and put them all together in my own work. I have used examples but not copied any of their stuff to mine. Well maybe a few lines that were very good, but there are a few sections where I do copy ‘them’ and/or ‘the origin’ of the story. Please be advised that I do not own ‘The Twilight Saga’ and or any other movies or stories related to this fanfic that come into play. Most of these chapters in the beginning will be from 3-5 thousand words, then gradually increase later being between 5-7 thousand words per chapter as the characters progress. I like my fanfics long and sometimes comedic. Again, I do not own any movie rights or any characters that come out from this... THEY ARE FANFICS. RATED M FOR MATURE!!! Please be warned: there are some light and heavy lemons in this fanfic. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED!!! SEX SCENES YES!!! AGAIN, YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED!!!

Alexandro died saving a little girl from getting ran over, funnily after he died, he meets a ROB saying it died stupidly, he is given a wheel of powers to spin and a spin to when he will arrive in another world. He awakens as a baby in the world of Twilight. Having a good childhood, when he hits his teenage years, tragedy happens and is left alone, family murdered and a crisis of who his long-life mates will be. While adventuring in an old tomb, he finds an old relic that when after he put together something wonderous happened. He is transported through dimensions. Will he ever get back to his? Will he want to? Will he live for revenge or get passed his grief of his family being murdered by the same type of supernatural's that murdered his family? Or will he choose another route to happiness?

This is not a pick-up all females he sees harem, the most he'll have is three maybe four. He started with three, that's because they were soul mated to him, not a choice. That ROB wasn't giving him one and he may have another along the way but that's it, no others, no midnight getaways, no rendezvous.

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it is actually really good the only thing you could work on is paragraph spacing, because it is really hard to read when everything is clumped together.

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Koloja

Will he live for revenge or get passed his grief of his family being murdered by the same type of supernatural's that murdered his family?????????????????????????

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Miki_Marlo75

The story has many parts without context, the time jumps are random and the grammar is annoying, it is continuous text divided into paragraphs Clearly the plot jumps from development to revenge and sudden acceptance without arguments seems forced

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Itsyourfriendmike

Garbage! Garbage! Garbage! Garbage! Garbage! Garbage! Garbage! Garbage! Garbage! Garbage! Garbage!GarbageGarbageGarbageGarbageGarbageGarbage!

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Fernando_Cipriano

O protagonista é um idiota. Não existe motivo para ele fazer tanto mistério sobre seus poderes. Ele diz que não gosta de drama adolescente enquanto ele chega ser quase tão dramático quanto o Edward. Ele trata todo mundo muito mal, incluindo a Alice. Me diz quem no mundo conseguiia tratar a Alice mal.

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Nasu
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Good story so far. I like fics with an Alice focus. It does give me the feeling that I have read it quite a while back tho, a year or two. Is it based on another fic?

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JasonReilly05

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omnioutergod

is he going to give mates a chance or dose he want to live alone forever let's be honest he's immortal basically

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GodOfLight

The story has many parts without context, the time jumps are random and the grammar is annoying, it is continuous text divided into paragraphs Clearly the plot jumps from development to revenge and sudden acceptance without arguments seems forced

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Teraten
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Solid 5/5 love reading this FF so far [img=recommend][img=update][img=coins][img=update]

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