/ LGBT+ / Crimson Love(BL)
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Love. Lust. Betrayal.
These three words define the life of Mark, an ordinary student in a Chinese university. His life takes a 360 degree turn when he meets Akio, A Japanese transfer student. As time passes by, unusual things begin to happen. First, a criminal racket targets him and after that, his sole best friend dies without any reason. All this was enough to scar him for the rest of his life.
But, These events are the beginning of something catastrophic, like the calm before a storm.
Completed.
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How, What, Why, When... This is what was revolving in my mind while reading the story. In the beginning the Author describes the story as a mess, which I thought would get cleared up when I'd near the end, but sadly NOOO...The story's got too many elements and way too many scenarios; characters are hard to understand, as they all seem to have a multiple personality disorder- mostly they do stuff, without any rhyme or reason...it's basically a jumbled mess which has left me with so many unanswered questions.😖😖😖😖😖
This book was so good, I literally finished it in like three hours. I'm a big fan of BL and am always in search for good BL novels. If you're like me, you have to read this book. Aside from a few ****** mistakes, the plot was very interesting and the characters more so. All in all, I would have given it a 5,if not for the small mistakes. I recommend Author to get an editor if possible.
The writing has frequent punctuation and spacing errors but nothing a little proofreading can’t fix easily. It feels like Mark and Akio’s relationship was rushed somewhat in the beginning and then put on a standstill during Wang Xiu’s case. Perhaps if it was built up more slowly throughout the solving of her case, it would be more believable. I’m not quite getting the horror and thriller feel of the genre yet, but I can see it progressively getting there. What ruined the suspense for me, however, were the questions at the end of each chapter. It totally broke the story immersion for me because those questions are naturally asked by the readers themselves at the end. It’s redundant to ask such obvious questions. Besides this, I enjoyed the story! I like how Mark is half-Indian because most MCs on here are Chinese. Good job, keep it up!
Good story with great potential. like the characters and the development of the story. the writing quality need little work but overall okay. good work author.
I originally wanted to read it until 20 chapters, but then I realized I finished it until the end hahaha. I'm half into BL genre, but I didn't hate it so I'll give you a great job for the story. The writing quality would be more awesome if you add some more detail on it. Like how his reaction or how he felt. There were misspelling words or grammars too that need to be fixed and some cleanup. Well, who am I to judge? I'm not an English speaker and when I wrote my novel, I have a lot of mistakes as well XD. Anyway, good job for the story! I'll try to read your new story again in the future ;)
overall i like your book and how you building the story progress, and also the characters. may i know how many chapter will release per day?
Reviewing the latest 3 chapters- would suggest to improve grammer i.e she said, scratching her arm. Readability is fine in general. The sentence below though- what is the main subject? “Father,do you remember Akihito Makoto,the drug dealer?”He questioned. Sentence variety is there and passive voice is kept low. All the best ^^
Read few chapters and really liked it. Everything is good and interesting. Will complete your chapters soon and will reply again. My wishes to you 😄
I really like the story as it progresses.The characters are well depicted and the mystery is intriguing.Over all a good book and I would definitely recommend it.
I have read 15 chapters so far and I can already determine my most and least favorite character.I really like the new arc and can't wait to read more.Good job author!
I really like the story so much such a great ending good for the bad characters sych a blessing to have read a story like this hopes that this author will right many more bl stories thank you and godbless
The story that I read so far is really good. I love Akio and Mark's chemistry. This story is getting me hooked. The author know very well how to grab reader's attention. As I will read further I will give more reviews. Author thanks for the story!!! 😊😊😊😍
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This is the first BL novel I read, I'm only a few chapters on but somehow I find the story promising, i would probably give this for my sister to read lol, she likes that kind of stuff I don't know why, but writing is actually good and the character development keep it up
First off, even though this is the first BL novel that I'm reading, I'm not a stranger to BL (manga / anime). Anyway, I would normally review after reading at least 10 chapters, so here goes. I gave a 5* even though the grammar is not perfect (mine isn't either). I do appreciate the Author's efforts in improving it. As for the storyline, it's okay for me and personally, would have liked how their relationship developed slower in the beginning. Still, it's an interesting story. Thumbs up!
So, since it is a BL it kills me on the inside to admit how good the story is and how likable the characters are. So in the end, it's a nice novel, keep up the good work!
I really like this. Actually I really like BL stories. Thank you for writing this. I wish more of such stories from you.You are awesome.You
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