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Creating The Hardest Dungeon With my 1000X talent

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作者: Danger_Zone_69

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Our Protagonist Ron is a collage student. When he is playing games in a rainy day on his pc he get hit by a lightning and died. After waking up he found himself in a dungeon as a new dungeon master with a talent.

See as how he become powerful with his talent. He Summoned hundreds of Dragon, phoenix, Celestial fox and many other mythical monsters, and make powerful subordinates.

Join in his journey as he create the hardest dungeon the world ever seen.

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    CHAOS_REB

    It has potential but the writing quality at this moment is bad. No right spacing or use of punctuation marks to make the words become better. When the author remove this error then this book is good to go

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    Rudra_Khatri

    I really want to read this, I love Dungeon Master/Summoner kind of novels but damn 10 chapters stright and absolutely no story at all. Worldbuilding should be done by story Devlopment not by info dumping. Author should have done it like this. Story starts, 30 days pass away and as story progresses the narrative will move back to the past to explain how it was done, or maybe the characters can talk and you find out from their talk about the whole empires and stuff, you can do a lot but it just feels dull from the first 10 chapters.

    11d
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    ParadoxDaemon666

    If you can ignore the writing quality, it is really not bad, this is better than other dungeon novels.

    1mth
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    DaoistRovWhC

    Having read through all the free chapters the author had some very creative and novel ideas. however, there was no story development, we really only see one character and they are pretty flat. Status screens take up significant space ( although they are far more creative, when I usually see this happening). Writing quality was decent.

    1mth
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    Dacia_xiao

    Thanks for a Wonderful story. Storyline development has potential. Please author release more chapter.

    2mth
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    Tsniper
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    Good story thus far. It has potential to be a hit, Grammer issues are found and some chapters are bland. would be interesting to see some perspective of adventures about to stumble upon his dungeon or some senior dungeon masters seeing a new name rising the ranks fast.

    2mth
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    Will75
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    I liked the story and it has potential but there are a couple of problems. One is grammar I’m not at all an expert in grammar but I can clearly see you misspelled many words or completely forgot to write some. This makes overall writing quality horrible. You could solve this by maybe going back to read it over and make changes. Two the information dumps need to be spaced out. While it did help give an over impression of the world background. It also kind’ve made the story a little boring. Anyways I believe this story has potential and I hope you can develop its potential to the fullest

    2mth
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