/ Book&Literature / Cosmos Divider - Lord of Mysteries
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A man reincarnated in a strange and unknown world. The moon was red and he had a sword that seemed about to break in his hand. And the sword... did it speak?
Follow the story of this man on his way to become the best swordsman in a world of terror and madness.
I do not own the cover, I have no problem if the author wants me to change it. I'm still practicing English, so it would be good for you to correct any mistakes I make.
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I'll be honest, neither the writing quality nor the stability of updates are very good. I try to correct as much as I can, but there will be things that escape me because I am not a native English speaker. Also, I don't write every day (sometimes because I'm too tired and sometimes because I have something to do), so forgive me for this. Even so, I think you may like the story a lot, so give it a try!
looking forward to more of your story, hopefully u won't drop this before 40 chs . ,...................................................
Looks great, the sequence doesnt seem overpowered. So thats great. Besides a few spelling errors it looks great. its the first fanfic where klein finds out they are both transmigrated fairly quickly.
PLEASE DONT DROP THIS MY BROTHER!!!! GOOD FANFIC BUT COULD YOU UPDATE THIS FASTER BCS I CANT WAIT FOR READING MORE! DONT DROP THIS!!! DONT DROP THIS!!!
I couldn't find any good fics about LOTM so this is mt first one.There are some mistakes,but in total i like this fic.It would be better if more chapters released
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I cant wait for more chapters. Good work author...............................................................................................................
The author makes some mistakes, but it's better than a mtl. FillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFiller
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Seems good so far. MC has a new whole sequence, and an artifact? maybe a sefirah? not sure yet, unfortunately this novels has the same problem as nearly 99% of LOTM FF, the problem is: this is a weak-to-strong type, and everyone who reads the original knows that dont work. LOTM universe is a chessboard for the GODS/OUTERGODS, everything happens because they want it to happen, Klein was a puppet, that was the only reason he managed to get to sequence 0. The only way to make a good fanfic in LOTM is with a MC who can play the same game as the gods (which this mc cant) weak = you are basically reading the original without changes.