/ Teen / Cold Blooded Miss Ai; Please Notice Me
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Growwing up fatherless as a kid, Ai Meng's life had been one hell of problem. Her mother ensured that Ai Meng knows she was never wanted and made every second of living, hell for her. That was until she was nine and Ai Meng was given by her mother to her grandmother who took care of her until she was seventeen. She found her brothers, father and Fang Haoyu a rich second generation heir whom she thought brought nothing but trouble. What happens when Ai Meng's insecurities starts opening up when she got people who loved her for who she is? What happens whe she keeps telling herself she's a mistake, never wanted. What happens when she tries killing herself and making her family grief on her behalf, What happens when life doesn't go as planned. It kept throwing her back to Fang Haoyu no matter how badly she wanted to run away.
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Sorry, could not read past the first few paragraphs. I started against better judgment seeing that every word in the synopsis started with a capital letter. That was not the case in the first chapter luckily, but upper and lower case are not used according to standard English. The formatting generally should be revised. The punctuation separates connected elements into different sentences. Dialogue is written inside the running text without markers when it starts or stops. Etc. I realise this might be due to translation from a language where punctuation and other formatting rules are different. But it takes a lot of energy to figure out the text when it doesn't follow common writing rules at all, and the risk that the reader abandons it instead is big, which is a pity as the story itself might be good (I marked the other categories as "3" as I could not judge them.)
intresting i will add this to may library .