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Ciobara's Reincarnation

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作者: Eclipse_Ranger

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The Legendary Queen of Vampires sat on the throne of blood.

She had been plagued with the feeling of crushing boredom for centuries.
To relieve herself from this endless boredom she called upon her subjects to craft a spell she could experiment with.

Then as they were doing the event a young vampire boy rushed forward and cut the line angering those waiting and those watching expected him to be punished.

“I want a spell too!” the child cried in excitement.
“Tell me, what spell is it that you desire?” Unexpectedly the queen decided to allow him to tell her his idea for a spell.

“I want a spell to create blood tastier than humans!”

It interested her so much that she researched and planned for three hundred years. Until she finally succeeded in not only creating the spell but also optimizing it for a 3-year-old vampire.

Yet on eve of success, she died. Due to a magic scroll in her lab activating. Regrettably being unable to grant it to the one who requested it.

Though it wasn’t her end.

Her Eyes fluttered open and she was now in a new body but is she still the same as before, or will she experience a different life as another race?

This is the reincarnation of a vampire queen, but in this new life, how will she move forward with these events?

Disclaimer: The characters and images used in the book cover are not mine, If you are the original owner of the art or any images on the cover you can contact me on my discord: EverByte#0175

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A novel about reincarnation, an academy and going from weak to strong, common topics for a lot of readers on this website, as such, many may be tempted to simply skim by this novel based on this facts, however, I would recommend to give it a try, first of all, the novel has stable updates, a must for many people as even the greatest of story could be forgotten if they didn't have regular updates to keep the readers alert; the story development is hard to determine at the time being but it seems to be going at a good enough pace for now, the characters aren't very elaborated upon for now, except for the main characters who has been given a substantial amount of care when she was being crafted, the worldbuilding isn't enormous as of now but I can see good foundations being made, now, the big issue with this novel, as is with many other is the writing, there are quite a few spelling errors and bizarre sentences, it does not impede on the understanding of the story but they are a bit too noticeable and thus harm the immersion in the story, some would recommend grammarly but I strongly believe that only experience can fix this problem, all in all, I recommend for you to keep this novel in mind as it is promising.

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DaoistMK5HEc

I can assure that this novel is one of your best picks , it's just simply mind blowing , I won't just skip through the the chapters because it doesn't lack good content.

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BLACK_LIGHT_

The story is nice but there are a few writing mistakes though they will improve over time no need to rush things. And it is nice that the author is writing in a certain category that would be great for those who want to read a certain genre novel. If there are those who want to read about vampires. I recommend them this novel. Eclipse best of luck and keep it up.

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HaileyCelaro_1

Personally, this isn't my type of story but for someone who is more into this specific type of novel, it would be great. The author is very talented and I hope they keep up the good work. Good job [img=recommend]

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Blackmail2

i just read the first chapter,this story is interesting!i want to say , because i interested about bloods , hope writer can keep update🥰🥰🥰🥰

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zawkey

There was a certain part that could be improved in grammar manner. But, i'm not an expert for that so i will leave it to others. But, the story is good. The way the author described it was good. I would love to see this from you. I already added this on my collections.

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Heartless_Qi_

I just had to review your book 📖 I'd die if your just stayed here unknown it's a hidden gem 💎 hope you can write 1000 chapters and good luck with your new book 📖📖📖 📚

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Johnson_Ezekiel

Your story is a good one, wonderful character with nice settings, your grammar needs a lot of adjustment, structure and grips tone for better flow, but there is a room for improvement as you keep writing. I must say, this is a good novel. Keep writing and best of wishes!

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LIGht_Pen

So captivating and intriguing, the first chapter caught my attention almost immediately... to think of such a twist as creating a new type of blood, simply brilliant. I would definitely want to read more

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Sunny_Shumail

This story spiked my interest from the very beginning. I am enjoying reading it. The backstory is extremely fascinating and the addition of elements has gotten me hooked. Waiting to see where the writer leads this story. Good job 👍

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Debbie_Rozz

The book is brilliant and captivating, I love the direction of the story from the settings to the character to the development, the story is just brilliant .

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Devilstorm

A fantastic start to what I think will be a great. Though there are the common elements of reincarnation and weak to strong, the author has taken their own spin on those elements, taking a previously strong MC and having her reincarnated into the world she is now in. The story is well driven and I'm looking forward to reading more of the MC's journey towards what will be a legendary existence.

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Sharon_Rose18

An amazing book by this wonderful author ..good work [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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Flower_Something

I like this and everything. The emotions were written wonderfully and not it a dulling way. The description itself was captivating- while this is a classic system book, it was written differently from the others

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James15martin

Its a story that could have a lot of promise I just feel that the writing quality could improve as well as the dialogue scenes feeling a bit unnatural Best of luck to the author with the continuation of the story

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RG_Martin

As far as i've read this book i can tell that it has a lot of potential. I know that it will turn out an amaizing book. I wish you all the best in it author. 🙂🙂🙂

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Amelia_Solace

Awesome Start, I really liked it , unlike other stories it gained my interest. Even if its your first book i think it will be popular very fast [img=update]

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Lord_Streak

Seems like a nice novel. I enjoy the author's descriptive writing style. The concept is interesting enough. All in all a novel with potential.

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Homeless_Traveler

This might be biased but I love how the prologue of the story was written. It really has sparked my curiosity. however, the pacing feels a bit rushed in chapter 1, then it starts to stabilize again in chapter 2. the only other thing that needs improvement is the use of punctuation to make the writing clearer, and you're good to go.

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Nancy_Micheal_4985

great work author im really impressed with the way you started your story, I can tell from there, that you've got many ideas about this story I can't wait for the next chapter♥♥

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