Chase Me, Detective

I like the intro. Improve your characters, enhance the settings to make it more vivid and use well chosen words to create a spark to the imagination of your readers. Don't forget the strong plot twists. Goodluck!

I have a lot of fun reading this but there are some boring scenes. This was just the beginning of your journey as a writer so I understood. Keep on writing even you have limited audiences. I'm sure you will improve someday.

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Dumbell

Improve your writing skills. You're not good enough but hard work pays off. Remember that. I will be looking forward for more of your works.

You got something on this piece. Continue practicing and read other detective books so that you will have a wider perspective in writing stuffs like this. Don't worry, you'll be fine through experiences.

As I read your story it reminds me of my writing journey. I started also from writing detective stories. This book is great I have a lot of fun reading your story. Goodluck!

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PinkyWrites

I love how the story starts! It's a very good start. A page turner. Hoping that you will develop your character well and create plot twists.