/ Fantasy / Chaos Eyes
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In a planet we called earth in year 2020 a catastrophe accured in different parts of the world in which a dimensional rift opened making way for creatures which is called chaos beings to invade our planet killing millions of people along the way. inspite of the world's government successfully defending the planet they still fear the second coming of these invaders. Thus the government formed a secret organization that will one day defeat the chaos beings and they called it Defenders.
In year 2030 ten years after the catastrophe that shook the world a teenager named Jhin Kaizaki a survivor of the catastrophe found himself in a peculiar situation wherein he found himself having an ability to see the future.... Follow Kaizaki everyday life as it changes and knows the reason why he can see the future
(Picture not mine. but the edit is mine. just saw it on Google. if the original artist saw this. pls tell me so that I can put the credit to you)
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The flow of the story is smooth so far. The author has put lots of effort into the story while trying to make the concept clear. I liked the synopsis- It is very clear and describe the story in short! Just a few errors which could be corrected during editing! so far, well-done author! Happy writing!
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This is a great universe. The main character is relatable. The only thing is "I" is used to replace is, it, in, on and some of the English could use an good editor. It doesn't detract too much from the story though. It's a nice apocalypse survivor vs monsters story.
Writing quality, could use a simple spellchecker like Grammarly, it would take it a notch higher, Updates, seems stable, The story is rapidly changing every chapter, it's always on the move. As for character design, I personally would like more dialogue and inner thoughts. Background is great.
I like it so far the story is a bit simple but has promise for a much more complex storyline. Good work, Author. Give it a try you won't regret it.
Hello there. Author here so I'm just here to say that can I at least get your opinions in the form of a review or whatever you guys think is good thank you. Hearing from you guys in nice okay.
