/ Eastern / Celestial Of The Void
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A young man stood at a height of 1.9 meters with an exceptional and noticeable toned physique under his beasts fur clothing.
His light-brown skin illuminating under the rays of the sun with an above average face, chiseled jaws, straight nose and slightly thick sword-shaped eyebrows.
His brown eyes, deep like pools of honey with a shade of violet hiding within the irises, hinting a mysterious impression.
Throughout the span of 3 years, his raven black hair grew past his back, tied up into a simple ponytail.
Realizing fate has given him another chance reincarnating into a new body and coincidentally under the same name, Silver.
Coupled with his million years of experience and knowledge allowing him to break through the realms with ease.
He begins his journey through Desolate Tundra, challenging the emperors of this new world while obtaining a power that none can even grasp.
Will he rise to the top and change the era to a brighter path or become another common straggler on the path to cultivation in a once beautiful continent, now riddle with demons and beasts lurking in every corner?
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Novel idea is rather good, an enjoyable read. I'm pretty much a fan and I hope you're able to update more each day. Like the others, some grammatical here and there but it seems like your first work. Good job! I hope your writing skills improve throughout the story!
Writing quality wise it's still rough on the edges. But definitely a hidden gem on the eyes of the public. As for updating chapters, well not on fast side but you can definitely expect better quality of writing unlike some *ehem!* who just outright post them without even checking it. I know they're on their own but edit them properly. Well for character design and world background, expect a cliches of wuxia and martial arts kinda novel. That is if the author decides to spice things up, not ruin the overall quality of the story. Hopefully, unlike some authors who decides to rewrite the thing. I hope this helps although I know it's not much but hey I aleast gave a proper review unlike trolls who just wants the world burn.
Love it +!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!°!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!@!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!@!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
While I was quite invested initially. Over time the book become convoluted and too confusing. There were time-skips/changes which at the time weren't explained well and led to me just skimming the pages, hoping to get back to the story. So while the grammar was good and the story seemed fun, I was just unable to get back into the story and my interests had faded.
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It's easy to read, I don't really know about grammar or such things so I can't really tell if it was bad or good.. sorry for that :D But what I can tell is, that you put a lot of work in writing in it.. so please continue your good work :)
The story line seems okay, it's really hard to read due to the numerous grammar mistakes but those can be solved easily. I was confused at the flashback as I did not really know what was happening. Also, it would be nice to have a clear example of the currency, what are moon coins in pounds or yen? Apart from that, it seems to be thought out and there is clearly effort put in here, good job!
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Um dos melhores novel que já lê sinceramente recomendo muito espero que possa ter bastante capítulos seria ainda se aumentar a atualização de capítulos
It was alright until you added romance! Like come on, not every novel needs a harem or love at all! All the people who add romance are just thirsty losers!
go to RoYaLRoAd.com if you want to read more it has more chaps and was last updated like 2 weeks ago 0000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000
This is an amazing novel. At the Beginning you can see Silver adjusting to his new life in his new body. And I quite like how Silver slowly exposes his knowledge and skills, not too slow no too fast. In all honesty the novel is awesome and deserves praise! Just keep up the good work and pump those chapters harder than Saitama's punches!
"Coupled with his million years of experience" - this sentence usually makes me drop a lot of novels if I find mc doing stupid things/making choices that don't make sense...
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A unique cultivation novel and better than most generic ones. Easy to read, not that many grammar errors, and an interesting protagonist to follow is the equation for a good novel. Keep it up, Author LOABA! >3</
It has an engaging story. Don't let the reviews talking about writing quality discourage you to read this or you will miss out on a good novel. Yeah, it's not the best in terms of grammar but compared to average novel on wn? It's like Shakespeare.
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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
I really like the plot of the novel so far and the unique cultivation system seems innovative and I like it, I really like Silver's cultivation specifically as well, void cultivation is a great concept.
it is a fun story / novel, but novels with stories like that have often been published with different histories, if possible try to make something even more interesting (no need for new novels) could be the next update improved again, and continue try, don't take or revise other novels too often to make the novel more interesting because there will still be people who read a lot and will know it, so try to have your own original novel (not the revised results for yourself / change it to match our own story) try to see the original life then develop with imagination to fit blah blah blah blah, that's like 😅😅✌️ good luck 👍
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LOABA spends far too much time in the inkstone discord. Imagine how many chapters per day he could write if he didn't waste all his time there. You should read this web serial and let LOABA know with a comment on every chapter to spend less time derping and more time writing. Thank you. Skully out.