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Building an Empire in Game of Thrones

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作者: Dr_Dred

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Greg was the son of the smartest and most powerful people in the world. His Mom and Dad being geniuses made advanced technology that boosted the world's development level but also caused more conflict.
Follow Greg as he tries and build an Empire in Game of thrones
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This Story will be faced paced and include Kingdom building and a Harem
The Game of Thrones world will also have a slightly bigger population and bigger armies

This is a side project so don't expect fast updates unless readers ask for more.

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SeductiveWildPussy

Harem: Daenerys Targaryen, Sansa Stark, Margaery Tyrell, Myrcella Baratheon, Arianne Martell....... Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem

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Melshan

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anubis1650

I'm having a really hard time to tell if this is bad or good here's what I have to say I like the starting point of the MC its original for the starting point and the system isn't to overpower to start off I also like that he's introducing modern things for trade eventually here's what I don't like story reads a little more like a military log with some Flair it does not have much character development it's more of MC goes to point A dose things then goes to point B does things sometimes goes back to point A there's our only real three instances that I can think of that have some character development but for the most part it doesn't exploring characters including the MC I think it would be a very good story if it got Rewritten a little and started to explore and go in depth of the characters and make you invest in them

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Azazel_70

Good so far don't drop. .. ... .. . . .. . .. . .. ............................. . .. .. .. .... ..... ....... .. .. . .... ... .. . .. .. . . . .. ..... . . ..

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Telling_Tall_Tales

Not a great story don’t recommend.

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wcpwnsuto

Writing quality - It has a few errors in the chapters but its easily ignorable or you may not even notice them. Stability of Updates - Its about once a week, which for a kingdom building novel is not anywhere close to enough. Especially since the chapters are REALLY short and sometimes have very little going on in them. Story development - In 13 chapters so far id say the story has advanced plenty. BUT this is entirely because of time skips and has nothing to do with the actual writing. Basically the chapters are the MC doing something minor like a tournament or summoning characters or thinking about his plans again and again. Then the story has a time skip and all of a sudden he has a fort built or a spy network all around or a deal done with MAJOR characters. Basically all the things we wanted to read about were summoned up in a checklist after a time-skip and the things we don't actually care about or effect the story majorly are mentioned (though even then it is in very little detail). Character Design- There isn't much to say about the character, he isn't bad nor good. We know little about his past but that honestly is fine. We don't see any character development probably because the chapters are too short to pull something like that off. Or maybe its because the System does EVERYTHING for him. I wouldn't be surprised if the system has a character he can summon to wipe his behind. Due to the system being OP we never see the MC do anything worth while. Maybe when the MC gets his kingdom this will change but I bet it will only cause the system to become MORE OP. World Background - Its the GOT world so its already built for him so its hard to mess this up. And he doesn't mess it up, he seems to know what he is talking about. He did add more population into the world which I like very much and hopefully this has a Major role in future events. Overall - Its worth a read and wont take you more than 2 hours to get through all the chapters so far (if you are a slow reader and like reading the wiki when he mentions locations and people to learn more).

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FastestOfAllSperm

It's meh. He has system that serves everything in a silver platter. He summons people from the system. He gets rewarded easily from quests. The writing quality is good but the concept and story itself is meh. It's like a shounen story but without the struggle and action and more plot armour and OPness.

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LoveHarem

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Pythia
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This atrocity is an insult to the source material that only stupid or challenged people could enjoy. Do keep that in mind before you start this journey of aneurysms and no grammar.

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Samina_Nazir

The story seem lacking.the author makes essos seem weak and small and didnot have proper knowledge of GOT and how reality work.You should read Game of Thrones : The Norther Realms to get the feel of got.

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Prideofher

This is probably one of the most written GOT fanfics I have ever read in this website. Keep. it up author! [img=recommend]

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XavierKing_6497

Author you never explained how people reacted to him just having a soldiers that people have not seen before for example he summons soldiers and people don't say a thing pls explain

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GrimmTheWarlock

The idea for a fanfic is interesting, but the author knows neither the original novel nor the series. Example: it is the year 289.Denerys is about 7-8 years old and the author writes that in two years he will help her escape during the wedding with Drogo, while in the original, during wedding she is 13 years old in book and 17in the series, Another example is Loras Tyrell who both in the book and and in the show is gay, here he is interested in MC's sister (his summoned general) who is a woman. The author literally writes that Loras Tyrell is not angry that MC refused to join him, which wouldn't allow him to get to know his beautiful sister, which is why he is a bit angry about it. But he is not desperate because his lands are full of beautiful women( Read up to Chapter 20)

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RevolutionMan

Love got novels. Thanks and go more chapters. Interesting idea with kingdom build. But so slow new chapters. Ehh. Wait more more more chapters and empire build. But pls don't give him 10 girls harem it's shame)) 2-4 for emperor maximum

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Mastersun

The protagonist of this work does not know what diplomacy and restraint are in relation to other lords with whom he may well conclude an alliance and there is a feeling that this character does not understand that he has not achieved anything on his own and all he has is all thanks to the system and in fact not his and he should have thought at least once that if everyone gave it to him so easily, then they can take it away with the same ease, well, no, this character is so stupid that he makes enemies where he could make good friends

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Thrust

Ill be honest when i First saw this i was a little Skeptical But then i read it and i have to say its one of my favorites now thank you author!!! I Just wish there was more.

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Joshingo04

Buena historia, me gusta me el sistema y su funcionamiento...............,..................................,............................................................................Todos estos puntos son porque debo de poner la cantidad mínima de ciento cuarenta caracteres

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Rebekah_Willey

I really enjoy it so far. you could do alot with it i hope you add more chapters soon[img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]

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Lawrence_Borja

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