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Cyrus Knight arrives in Sunnydale with a secret.Struggling to blend in while subtly guiding events, Cyrus faces the challenge of earning their trust without revealing his knowledge. As Buffy and her friends grow increasingly wary of the mysterious new figure, Cyrus must navigate the delicate balance of protecting them from the shadows.
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the fic has some issues key of which is how quickly the mc integrates himself in the group while trying to be mysterious and failing at it. but while failing the story likes to refer to him as mysterious for some reason and the characters have odd moments as a result like people thinking he's hiding things after exchanging 10 words with the mc. it's just awkward and is the totality of the mcs character
Il y a deja un alex dans l'equipe, alors ont fais comment ? alex1 alex2 ? Il y a deja un alex dans l'equipe, alors ont fais comment ? alex1 alex2 ?
so far really good read. hope for buffy+MC !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I haven't commented for several chapters but the general atmosphere is this, still too many sentences that mean the same things, and too much xander yes and there, as I already said, if you like the series and the characters , you must respect Alex who does not like being called xander and correct when the AI uses this first name. As for Willow, Giles, and even Buffy, it's extremely light in terms of the depth of their characters. It's not because fans of the series know this that this is the case for all readers. I'm going to stop the adventure here (ch25), it's a story that's too flat, I feel like it wasn't made by a human and in the long run it's not fun. thank you for your efforts, I hope you will take writing lessons because your ideas are good, but being managed by an AI, it lacks soul