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Broken Martial Soul (DD2)

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作者: lumini

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Reincarnated into douluo dalu 2 with a broken mutated Body spirit: Frankenstein.

Alex and his wonderful girlfriends enter a world of cultivation, how will they survive?

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This is my first Fan-fic so constructive criticism is appreciated.

I don't own douluo dalu or any of its associated works. I don't own any of its characters or any characters used from any other media.

I take full credit for this cover though. I definitely didn't draw it just so I could say that.......

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Zzz_808

it doesn't matter about you causing trouble for mc, but with all the interactions he's like a solid idiot it's nauseating and what's with that broken summon. on what basis it could be done that he didn't even have a spirit ring and how disobedient his summoned was was annoying. it's ridiculous to say this is a story when it's just a stupid mc story, ridiculous, irrelevant, complete idiot.

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lumini

So I first posted this story under 'novel' instead of fan-fic and couldn't change it afterwards 😅 I hope you enjoy reading this as much as ...... as much as I enjoy reading my favorite fan-fics 🤣 Have some milk and cookies while waiting for the next update, Author's orders

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RageKittenOP

Better luck next time! The mc is a complete idiot and he has summons so you can expect him to do nothing while ordering servants around. ………………………

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