Bringing the game items to real world

LV 14

Truck_Samaa

Good as expected, Writing quality: Good as it is. Easy to understand, good paragraphing and sentencing. Little to no error! story development: Like I said in the qna, I'm in doubt about how you're going to proceed, I still feel like we're still in the prologue for the time being. I'm expecting a lot tho and the potential your premise has is immense so I hope you'll make use of it. Character design: I'm expecting a character growth. As good as the mc is, I feel he's not mature enough, but I understand he just got his power and if I was him, I would excited too and do a lot of unneeded stuff, but that's why I'm expecting a character growth. updating: Yup, good as always, I'm seeing update nearly everyday so props given world background: Similar to story development, still unsure of it, I'm expecting a profound background too and hope its not so " bland " to say. Overall: Much love, interesting premises, lots of potential. Sure the beginnings chapters might not be the best according to some but I understand him and his situation of finding he has power out of the blue. PR: I recommend to read it and support the author, he has a good reputation for his other book so I expect a good story from this. And don't you dare drop this, I've got my headlights on you 🚛

LV 4

Iceyunderground

I'm not a professional reviewer or anything, just someone who thought to give his two-cents about what he thinks about this novel. I've read up to ch. 78, so this review will be based on that. Writing Quality: 4/5 - There are a few mistakes when using he/her or his/hers, nothing too major but it's enough to make you have to pause and re-read what just happened to 'Get it'. Stability of Updates: 4/5 - I started reading when there were already 78 chapters available, so I have yet to experience any wait time, so it'd be unfair to give a perfect for this. I also noticed that the release dates for most the chapters take place roughly every two days (-ish), so that's okay. Story Development: 4/5 - The pacing is fine as it is, especially once you get to the later chapters. Though there are parts that feel a bit ... draggy? Character Design: 5/5 - I'm really liking the MC (Robin is his name). He knows what he wants to do, he has a conscience that he won't cross easily (good on him), he grows as a person and yet still manages to stay himself. Again, I'm no expert or anything when it comes to reviewing and stuff but I like this. Not to mention all the other side/support characters, they're all fun to read about. Though I will say this, I will drop this to a 2/5 if my boy Gengar (spoilers, MC gets a Gengar) don't show up and get some of that spotlight soon... Jk author, jk ... no I'm not! ... nah, jk, jk ... or am I? World Background: 5/5 - The in-novel world is based upon our current real world (takes place in 2023) so expect a lot of current real world stuff in the novel. I be sincere here, I'm not 100% up to date on everything going on world-wide, but again I'm no expert, so I'm willing to believe ya for the sake of the enjoyment of the novel, hahaha! Yeah I probably could've been okay rating this 4/5, but I actually learned quite a bit about Indian culture through this novel so I figured, "eh, why not a 5?" Overview: Fact is, should you spend your precious time reading this novel or not? I'd say... yeah, give it a shot. I'll admit, it's not the greatest novel out there, but it's still a fun and entertaining novel to read. I guess I'll update this review once it gets to 100+ chapters to show any change in thought.

LV 13

AsianLadyBoy

This story had a great idea. But its life in my library was tragically cut short by poor execution, slow pace, and a lack of a relatable MC. It's hard to sympathize with an MC who has a mental breakdown over a POS taking his own life after he was caught ordering the death of many innocent people and ruining many students lives. Also, way too many chapters of his BS mental dilemma he was having with taking POS unfit to be called human garbage lives. I don't mind there being a chapter like this but this stuff was dragged on for way too long that it made me hate the MC even more. Now, I tend to put myself in the MCs place when I read a story, and a lot of his decisions to me just felt like were made by the author in order to slow the pace of the story down. He worries about Big bad guys coming to get him yet he does nothing to become stronger till later on when he's in danger and he wishes he was. So you know the whole wait till bad stuff happens to realize my mistakes to then decide to become stronger. Just another classic overused way to push a story that has an OP ability or character in a story forward. And those to me are the worst type of stories. The ones where it feels like they weaken the MC's brain compacity in order to think clearly so they can push some BS character development down the line. With the whole cliche "I do need to get stronger or I will die like I almost did today". We as readers are on the internet all the time. We know how the world works. Yet somehow he docent want to get stronger quickly for some reason. Even though he mentions a lot of bad people doing bad things or scenarios of bad people wanting the technology that he may bring to the world. So it becomes frustrating that the author makes the MC realize all of this yet he docent make him seek a way to truly make himself stronger in order to prevent any of those bad things from happening. As I said, he literally waits till he's in danger to realize that, It's so dumb. The only thing he does to help him early on is to get a pokemon to protect him. That he docent want anyone in the world to see. I say this because if he was in danger in the open. Surrounded by many eyes he would most likely hesitate to let his pokemon save his life. So he pretty much becomes useless in those scenarios. Oh, and he also got a charm that would stop some bullets. But it seemed like he forgot about that when people were pointing guns at him. Now, I did like some of the story. Loved the AI, loved the pokemon. Also enjoyed the choice of your first Android. But the second one was awful. She was so annoying and it became even more frustrating to read. She reminded me of those annoying system novels where the system never stops sh*ting on the MC and calling him dumb and weak. I hate those stories so much. So in conclusion like I said, this story had a great idea. But its life in my library was tragically cut short by poor execution, slow pace, and a lack of a relatable MC. You may like it but after 42 chapters I did not.

LV 2

R0B

Good idea, but Mc is an idiot, the story is in slow pace, games are not fully explored. To be honest mc doesn't really care about his power either, he only wants to live comfortably, the only reason he isn't living comfortably is because he is a retard and it only went well for him because he started taking ai robots who are loyal to him because... He is their master. He doesn't give decisions, he is on a ride... A normal person with the brain and his power could've become the planet's leader after a few days.

If you want the MC to be a Immortal Cultivator then play 'Immortal Taoist'. That will be op haha.

LV 4

Hello_Vtubers

Simply put, the mc is an idiot and this novel have to many cliche scenes, I already dropped this after chapter 7 cause I got bored at the boring interaction and the stupid decision the mc makes. though this would have been a good novel if the author managed to execute it perfectly specially on the early chapters because sometimes the Early chapter is what make's a novels foundation. This is my point of view guys, so don't be a b!t¢h about it

LV 5

Cacakman

I usually don't make review.. But this fanfict actually made me pulling my hair so hard. So I'll try to make my review as fair as possible without spoiling the stories.. The Good * The writing actually really good. Languange wise and how Author bring the story to the table. * The premise actually have potential. Dig deep and make it realistic as possible. You can do it Author! * The interaction between character and how Author describe thing felt so natural. Believe me, I write a lot as it is my job. It's hard to write as good as how Author write. The Bad * The premise itself is double-eged sword. It have potential, but can go wrong easily if Author don't know what is the goal. And that actually happened to this story. * The character dan interaction between them itself was really fun to read. But not their decision. Try to read it by yourself. If you don't like, then you won't. If you like, then it gonna be a decent reading material to past time. The Ugly * The story development is.... how to put it nicely... dumb. MC shouldn't be this irrational and clueless on every choices he made with his background. Seriously? I won't nitpick. But, really Author? He is adult for Godsake! Not a 5th grader. If you said he is gonna be realistic, stick with it. (Sorry for my rambling) I know Author write some fanfict in this platform. So maybe if you as reader wanna try this fict, give it a try... If you feel this stories not your cup of tea, try other fict made by Author. Godspeed for Author! Wish you all the best. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

LV 12

Krypton71

Think it’s finally time to drop this. It has been hinted that there is more to this world (the hidden supernatural) which I did not sign up for when starting this. Not a big deal since the author has to do what he has to do to make this story longer and more interesting but I do think the title is slightly deceiving in that sense. Anyways was a pretty good story upto C20ish. I think after that JARVIS got involved and it became too… I don’t know how to say… maybe flat? Well, decent first attempt author.

LV 2

Interesting but frustating read. The premise and the has a lot of potential but way the Author made the system has become a dragging problem. The system is too simple in it's rules "take anything you get in a videogame that isn't strictly *alive* and bring it to the real world (you can't use things like mods or cheats/creative/sandbox mode)". Because this system is made without limitations like restriction levels or such, it's so OP that anyone could speedrun from 0 to being a god in a day. The the author knows this is a problem so he did the things that most frustated me while reading this FF: Selectively making the MC beyond stupid, and butchering any decent pace this novel could have gotten. This combined to the blatant self-insert and wish-fulfilling nature of the story makes me sometimes don't know if I'm getting frustated at the MC or at the author. I will stick at least until the Author shows the paranormal world background he's foreshadowed, as it may reignite the interesting spark that this FF started with. Thank you for your time.

LV 4

Marvel_Fan8502

i quite like the idea as i had read you first novel from chapter 30 so far your writing quality is and your imagination is amaging so i am excited to what you have imagined for this fanfic

LV 4

Classic_sans

This is a good novel so far, even if there is only 2 chapters so far, I will concur waiting with anticipation

LV 4

Alcides_Martinez

I think your story will be great to see the mc did in the future and can you have a list of all the games the mc can items from . Can the mc create a character in a online games like MMORPG games bring the characters to life and listens to his commands. Also he better keep is powers a secret or people we use them for bad things .

LV 4

Kancha_T

Maybe I am being unreasonable, but I was intrigued and intersted when I read the story title, but it didn't reach expectations... This might be because your still in the starting stage and the MC needs time to adapt and settle but the plot seemed quite slow to me. I quite didn't understand some decisions by MC and it seemed to me that he became a little reckless once Jarvis arrived. Also I thought this would be multiversal and other stuff being involved with lots of action, but as far as I understood this is kind of slice of life in the real world only with MC having some power. I'll let more chapters to stack and come back afterwards to try this once again, but for now I will give this a pause. Keep up the writing though because many more like where your going with this, but not everyone's tastes match. P.S: Your Marvel story with John as MC is still one of my favourite though...

LV 14

AinzO0alGown

Dumass MC playing skyrim with no mods, who does he think he is

LV 5

_leonid_

His ability is too strong. Even now, he could theoretically seize power on the planet. Like going all in in Star Wars games... Death star, dreadnoughts, droid factories...

LV 1

Slave_of_freedom

When the MC has very strong power and with almost no limitations, the only way for the protagonist to not take over the world in a few weeks and make it stupid, and that's exactly what happened here. (Google translator)

LV 4

Ai_is_Future

"Bring the Game Items to Real World" is a thrilling webnovel that explores the captivating premise of merging the virtual and real worlds by bringing game items into reality. With its action-packed storyline, this fanfiction offers an entertaining and fast-paced reading experience for fans of the genreIn terms of writing style, "Bring the Game Items to Real World" provides an accessible and easy-to-follow narrative. The dialogue flows smoothly, and the action sequences are vividly described, enhancing the sense of immersion. However, there are instances where the pacing feels uneven, with some sections rushing through important plot points while others linger on less significant details.In conclusion, "Bring the Game Items to Real World" is an enjoyable novel that is keeping readers engaged with its fast-paced plot and diverse challenges. While it could benefit from more robust character development and world-building, fans of the genre will find this fanfiction a satisfying read that sparks their imagination and leaves them eager for more virtual adventures

LV 13

Spielmann

i like this story very much. It is well writen and has no big errors and the small errors i have not seen by reading the chapter^^. Good punctuation and correct use from he/she, many persons here make this basic error and that destroys the reading flow. Character is likeable and not a mister perfect. He makes errors but is learning from them. What i have read the world background has many questions that makes it interesting and the story is developing nice with a good touch realismuse. i can only say read a couple chapters and you will know fast ob this story is was for you

LV 3

WhyDo_I_StillExist

2B as the love interest? [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

LV 4

CryingJoker

The concept is great, just the exploration can be done to a deeper level, like he could literally bring the android droids from cod aw, and create his own superpower at the World level. he could even end world hunger by just taking out crates of food and does his power work in the middle of game, like in gta the player is doing the diamond heist mission and the mc just in the middle of heist takes the diamond or does it have to be owned by the mc