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Have you ever thought about life, it is said that everything has a beginning and everything has an end, many do not like this phrase and for this reason seek another way to stay alive without reaching the end, many succeed and can have a new life but for me this is all new, not because I had a pretty exciting life or a pretty boring life, I was just born as a new soul who was about to live his first life but a person ruined everything, not for me but for him because he lost his chance and gave it to me.
Now the question is, who is Ryōmen Sukuna?
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Interesting potential and a wonderful start to a story. I hope you gradually power him up or you can go to op route depends on you. At the end of the day have fun with your story and don’t listen to haters
Mi propia historia pues claramente me voy a dar una buena calificacion hehe.........................................................................................
Although the concept of the story is amazing, I'm not a fan of how it's written but i don't blame you since this is translated however it seems this FF is severely lacking in dialogue. one of the most important rules in writing is "show don't tell" but this FF includes a lot of moments where things could've been described with dialogue instead of just descriptions. at most, chapters would include only a couple of lines of dialogue but i believe that most chapter should include ~10-30% dialogue, even if the dialogue itself doesn't progress the story. nevertheless iIreslly like this FF, good luck with writing
It's a good story, I like how the story goes and I want to see how the character will be in the future hehe, please keep writing..............
Here's how we gonna do this Roses are red Weapons against me won't prospa With this sacred treasure I summon Big Raga, the Opp Stoppa