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Blue Lock : Unlocked

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作者: Dividium

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The Japanese Football Association built a very ambitious project, "Blue Lock". They had selected three hundred youngsters around the country to create a revolutionary striker that will win the world cup for Japan. The director of the project is Jinpachi Ego, one big egoist and for his project, he selected one particular person. That isn't Japanese at all and holds no real value for representing it.

So why would Ego select him? Just for the sake of the experiment...will his experiment go according to the plan or backfire? Even Ego had no exact answer.

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Dividium

Shameless Author Review, bear with it! I hope I'm able to succeed with this fanfic, (which itself is a kinda weird wish, considering it is a fanfic) I wrote this in a rush, literally was so motivated that wrote 10k words in a day and it'll be a shame if I don't get anything from that. Happy reading! This is MC's AI-Generated image

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Kr_nos

Blue Lock fanfics are rare and I am obsessed with it, it's not only the reason I am giving this book five stars, but it has effort put into it by an experienced author. The main character's goals and development are in my interest and am patiently waiting for what he is going to do to achieve them. His goal for a footballer is something very natural and I understand ig myself! We need more.

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rosemary_dania

this was the best storie of blue lock i seen since no one has created knk klllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll

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AstroKid

----------------------------------------------------------------- -Continue like that, very good story, waiting for more chapters- -----------------------------------------------------------------

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bg_bg
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A very promising fanfiction on the blue lock. I wish the author had quit his job at some point. And then I know the work on basketball, which was good, but the author abandoned it.

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Truth_Only_Reader

Good writing quality better than a lot of fanfiction novels. Too early to determine story development but I like it so far. Character Design are just the blue lock characters and I appreciate we have art for what the MC look like. Updating Stability is fine, it updates regularly and wants me to keep reading. World Background is explained since its blue lock, and its awesome. Overall good story, and I hope this updates more.

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Wraze_Vengeance

I’m giving this novel a 4.8 stars it pretty much is a 5 but I can’t give the author a 5 on updating stability since it is early in the novel with only 5 chapters at the time of this review . I feel it deserves this rating because it is based on Blue Lock and those are rare especially good ones; this is one of the good ones I can tell. The writing quality is great there are no spelling errors the sentences are great I have not noticed any wrong punctuations or capitalizations also the conversatiions the characters have are natural and don’t sound like a Chinese novel iykyk. The MC seems really cool and unique he’s also my ideal when it comes to football players physically strong I just hope he’ll be good at defense. Story development is good it’s the blue lock story but with a European type twist. World background it’s blue lock lol not much to say the mc has a unique background though.

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Rosignol

What else can I say, he talks about himself. The only flaw I can find is the update of the chapter at the moment, it's quite strange, I still don't know when the chapters are published, but otherwise it's really a very good FanFiction Blue Lock. The rhythm of the story is good, the overall context... well, it's Blue Lock. The writing quality is really very good after seeing later because FanFiction is not yet very advanced in the chapter. The design of the characters... the Mc is the only new character and we know his story enough for the judges that they are not bad, the fact that he is not a Japanese to find at random by Ego is even better. In any case, it's a very good FanFiction if you could just tell me the calendar of chapters, it wouldn't be bad, thank you!

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Sinofwrath

The story is still in it's beginning phase but if the quality of the earlier chapters carry onto the future than as a Blue Lock fan-fic I have great expectations from this

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IRTendor

Blue lock fanfics are rare to find, and good blue lock fics even rarer. So far, I'm loving it.

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faeeeee

Love it just wish there were more chapter and longer

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Daoisticdaoist

this seems really good hope you won't drop. got a question though, will there be romance with anri? hope so.

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DaoistSBULPQ

Мне очень понравилось, продолжай в том же духе, Денис крутой оригинальный персонаж, очень сильный. Как по мне, хорошо расписанны персонажи, длинные главы(это очень хорошо как по мне). Буду с не терпением ждать следующих глав!

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Daoist5LQJKW

Gooooood esta historia men , sigue asi será un gran libro , por favor que se nos enamore anri y no juegue en Madrid jajjajjaa , muy buena historia te felicito

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Lord_greem

we neeeeeeeeeeed moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep pls

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