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Waking up under bizarre circumstances, I live as I please. This is the story of how my new life began in the Dragon Ball Universe.
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Wow. What can I say. This novel is not my pride or joy. It’s just something I did. In the heat of the moment one might say. It’s good enough to pass the time at least. Why doesn’t the rating reflect this you ask? My finger slipped. Oops.
Read up to chapter 29 and lost the little interest and willpower I had to continue. I may review again if I feel like reading the remaining and additional chapters at a later date. The writing quality is understandable which is one of the few positives about this work. I liked the general idea behind his choices of his wishes. It was just the execution in which the story was delivered that was a huge let down. The whole story (up to where I stopped reading) felt like the author was rushing towards something, something that wasn't even explained or hinted at, and in the process forgot about developing the plotline. The main characters personality is non-existent outside of his determination for training, and his interactions with others in the world is even worse which in itself is an impressive feat. The story up to when I stopped was nothing but a giant filler episode, so 29 chapters where the protagonist spends his whole life powering up with no noteworthy challenge or conflict to speak of until the end of the arc. And even when the battle came it was rushed and nonsensical. In the end of you are a big fan of anime where they spend 10 thirty minute episodes powering up for a battle that lasts only 5 minutes then this story might be right up your alley.
'I'm a big fan' , ****kkkkkkkkkkkkkk, good beginning but around chapter 15 more and more nonsense, **** this shitty fan-fiction, DÉÇU.......
It unique and I look forward to more as the story unfolds, the shift in personality is a little jagged but otherwise pieced together good. It doesn't focus on just one fact most spam sayian and the like but it has a unique twist.
It was really good at first. Refreshing even, since it didn’t have a harem or drama..no fuss, no muss. But then it went to ****. All he did was train and get stronger nonstop. Normally that would be a good thing but just no. After he gets killed for being an evil dick, it just gets worse. He goes to Naruto world and the nerfing never ends. He gets the bloodline of an Uchiha, a senju, an Uzumaki, and a hyuuga. He enters Konoha as a civilian but has large amounts of chakra so he seals it up so people won’t find out. BUT! Later on can’t get access to his chakra anymore. It’s basically through out the entire time he is in the Naruto world. At first it was a nice change. He wasn’t just training anymore. The Mc adopted Naruto and worked at ichiraku. It was nice. With the bloodlines of both the Uchiha and senju clans, he meets Asura, Indra, Hamura, and finally Hagoromo and gets their chakra. HOWEVER! He can’t use any of it because of the seal he placed on himself. The Mc then leaves Naruto and the village and goes out to train himself nonstop. By some shenanigans his sealed chakra gains sentience and won’t listen to him so he can’t even use any of it. The only time his chakra lets him use itself is when he’s hunting down bijuus so he can feed it to his sentient chakra. Fuck you author for wasting my time. I swear..all stories are either badly written grammatically with sex driven plots and harem or they’re **** like this. You can read but can’t enjoy it.
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After 20 chapters nothing happens at all it’s dumb lol except that the MC becomes way to overpowered and that’s really it lol he doesn’t do anything with the plot except kidnap gohan and train him from end of cel saga to kidd buu... so everything with videl and such isn’t there... it’s a waste of time don’t bother
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Good fan fic not like other fan fics where MC train for a year or 2 becomes OP and start humping all the women in the novel Good work hoping for a cultivation world for the 3rd arc OP MC and Training manic if you dont like fan fics like these make an immediate U-Turn dont ruin it for people who actually like reading the novel
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I just have found this pépite all I can say that the people are saying in the commentaire of the first few chap are true . yes the mc become op really quickly by using the mécanique of the world, but let me just ask a question, is this something bad ?I say no because if you were at is place you would also cheat the system. To help the people you likes in the storie, it is an op protagoniste with no objective but to become the most powerful and to become a powerful person that nobody can stop, I find the plot twist of the end of the arc "magnifique" because it is something that you see not coming, but it is totaly possible because of the "sense of justice" that goku&co has . I think it is really difficult to make a op caractére, to have the possibility to kill him, i love the fact the mc is not good but do thing, because he can and want i do not want a mc locked in a selfsens of rightouness, because it do not exist something only good or only bad, it doesnt really exist in the universe of light novel because its always help someone, something, or else it would never exist.
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Writing quality: Good. Without much of a complaint. Stability of updates: More or less. Only one daily chapter. Development of History: none. There is no development, The MC is a young, who only trains, fighting, or teaching Gohan, which is almost everywhere. It also does not feature a bit of the story of Dragon Ball, it's just random snippets. There is no romance. Character Design: He's crazy for training, there is no personal feeling or something like that. It looks like a robot. World Fund: Almost nonexistent. It has no traits, no secrets, or anything like that. If it changes the names of characters and worlds, I can not imagine that this is a DB fanfic. Note: Sorry for the awful English, this is not my main or secondary language.