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“I shall see the end of this day!”
In a world on the edge of collapse, who could defy despair? In the ruins of dreams and shadows of death, who was writing fate’s cruel script?
I stepped into the world of my favorite novel, where reality and fiction blurred into a twisted nightmare.
Collapsed cities, monstrous nightmares, and a sky shrouded in blood. Deception, betrayal, secrets, and survival… The pages turned endlessly, yet the answers to the world’s mysteries remained out of reach.
This is the story of an ordinary average writer, whose life has been filled with nothing but misfortune and mysteries.
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I'm going to be shameless and give myself a five star review. However, this novel is the revised version of the original. Sorry for doing so suddenly. If you have any questions, then I'll try my best to answer them as much as I can. Also, this will be no harem. In fact, this story won't focus on romance. The main theme of this story is tragedy so please be prepared.
I like this story a lot so far, tho it gives ORV vibes, I'm curious to see how you make this story your own! Awesome stuff
Haven't read it yet but I think it's quite good. Just hoping it's not downgrade version of orv.
while the setting might seem similar to ORV the characters interaction and their mentality make it different which makes this story more interesting and enjoyable
Currently leaving this at 3 stars on average, as I will explain. The writing quality is quite decent. I notice a few areas where it could be improved upon, but I also have seen much worse, and the errors are ignorable and don't impact the quality of reading. The writing is definitely enjoyable and feels clean and smooth. The dialogue also fits naturally, although certain aspects of it feel a little stiff. As to the story itself, it is quite good, but as many may have noticed, I believe there are many similarities to the popular web series Omniscient Reader's Viewpoint (ORV). While I see the attempts at divergence from said story, as well as attempts to make originality, I believe there is not enough uniqueness to rate the story, characters and world building any higher than 3 stars. This is due to the fact that ORV's story is quite well done, and so using many of its aspects would definitely generate a good story, but using so many aspects borders a copy/plagarism. As of chapter 37, I have noticed a significant increase in uniqueness, but I still believe certain characters and scenes are too similar for my liking. Ultimately, I would still recommend the story as I believe there is an honest effort to generating a proper and unique novel.
Gonna be certain. It's a great book to read. sending my love to the MC by the way.
Very good novel, i hope it continues . Some people say it’s same as orv , personally I don’t care about that because all I want is a novel like orv , I hope you don’t let that comments make you stop writing this novel ,it’s great novel and has potential be a great story
this clearly just downgrade to ORV the writing in this storyis very jarring dialogue of the characters are so poring and devoid of substance there be paragraphs of just constent yapping that could of been done in like 3-5 sentences but is done in like 10 fill space
أليست هذه رواية وجهة نظر القارئ يعلم كل شئ نفس الرواية مع اختلافات بسيطة جدا حتى الاسم الذي يخص بطل الرواية يعتبر نفس الاسم لم تغير شيئا من مقدمة الكتاب غير اختلاف المكان فقط روايتك كانت ف المستشفى اما الرواية الاصليه كانت ف القطار والرجل الذي يقتل الجميع والالقاب وكل شئ
In the beginning the novel is REALLY similar to orv but as the storie unfold the more complex and unique it becomes I can't really give a 5 star because of how similar to orv but even with that , this novel is a masterpiece that is written at perfection by the author and i thank the author for creating this novel apart from these I don't see any grammar big grammar mistakes apart from two but that's understandable (even i sometimes make mistakes and iIthink I made some in this review)
it was a shame I only got to read a few chapters and everything got locked, everything was just getting so good! anyways great novel would recommend
As a fan of orv reading this is really comforting, the characters looks and names are a bit similar but the story itself is original !
This novel, inspired by ORV, is incredibly structured and organized, making it easy to follow. Each character is deeply developed, with detailed actions, thoughts, and appearances. Although I haven't read ORV before, this story has caught my interest, and now I must give it a try. Whether you're a fan of ORV or not, I highly recommend "Beyond The Eternity."
At first I thought it would be something like ORV but looks like I was wrong. It's a good story. looking forward for more of it.
I love this story and the concept, I'm just rooting for its success because it's somewhat different from most of the stories I've seen recently.
I felt creeps while reading It was like I could really feel the MC pain and I found visualise it Kudos Author Hoping for this to get contracted soon
Giving this five stars because the world building itself is phenomenal, a good book that will hook you from the very start.
Hello, dear readers. This is the Author and here is my review for this story. Of course, it is a biased review since I'm the one that wrote it. But still, isn't every author like this? Anyways, I'm here to give a few points about my novel. Firstly, the novel was inspired by ORV so don't be surprised if the beginning of the novel or characters may seem similar. However, it does have its own storyline and development. Secondly, The MC is a successful writer that has written many stories but he is rather introverted and views the world like a novel. He is very manipulative and some can even call him 'Heartless'. Even so, it is not completely true. He is smart but he can be outsmarted as well. He has a golden finger but does not completely rely on it to survive. After all, nobody likes reading a story where the MC can solve everything. Thirdly, it's a progressive story so the plot and development will evolve the more you read and the further you read, you'll be cursed by the urge to know more. I know people might not like it but I'll urge you to read it to the end. I'll like it if you're active in the comment section and let me know your thoughts about the story. Please be nice since I'm also human too. And please don't say I'm Han Sooyoung. Thank you for reading this shameless review and may the story bless you.