/ Fantasy / Beast Monster System
概要
500 years ago on Earth, the Apocalypse doomed life on the Blue Planet. Humanity was in a pit of hell as the Strike of Zombies, Mutation of Animals, and Appearance of Monsters happened altogether. Humankind was forced to leave their native planet for an indefinite period.
For hundreds of years, humans lived in Arcadia — a planet so far away from Earth that the only way to reach it was through the Portal. For hundred of years, humans coexist with the aardeans — a humanoid race native to the Pastel Planet.
After more than three centuries, conflicts between humans and aardeans spark the idea of war. Genocide of humans has always been the clear end to the war. To save humanity from yet another doom, the Leaders secretly formed the Saviors and send them to Earth.
Each of the ten members of the Saviors is granted a System for the Mission, including Aksel, who is granted the Beast Monster System.
To his father, Aksel is an embarrassment; but he wants to change that — so he joins the Saviors. He determines to end the Apocalypse on Earth so that humanity could return to their native planet and prevent the war against the aardeans. Aksel goes on the Mission optimistically, without knowing what could possibly happen once he set foot on the Blue Planet.
*The cover art and character illustrations were made with openart.ai.
[NOTE: THE BOOK IS CURRENTLY BEING REVISED FROM THE VERY FIRST CHAPTER. IT IS RECOMMENDED NOT TO READ THE BOOK UNTIL THIS NOTE IS DELETED]
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Can we have more chapters here, please, author-nim? Hardly wait to see the rest of the story!!! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I love how the story going on so far, it'll be very interesting to see how the mc's character will develop. Great job author, keep it up [img=recommend]
The story so far, as I haven't read too many chapters yet, seems to be fine. I would even say great. it's the fact that the English is used in a way that is very weird and confusing. it's as if the author doesn't understand how to use the English language correctly. but in weird ways. they know the words of English clearly but they don't know how to use them in sentences and paragraphs to make actual sense. my other complaint is the lack of details during action scenes. simply saying this person attacked and this person avoided the attack then this person attacked and this person avoided the attack as well, I would love to know what the attack was and how it was avoided so that the action scenes are actually interesting instead of being extremely vague and pointless to read about. the story itself so far is exciting and interesting. maybe the author will improve as he goes?
I haven’t read yet but synopsis is freaking funny since i thought it be like he wouldn’t want to eat raw meat. But no its because he is vegan that was unexpecting. I read it when i get home.
The story is exciting. The Character building of the novel is good, and the setting is quite detailed enough to make it easier for the reader to understand the story—Highly recommend it!
Terrible English!!!! Barely readable. Seriously why write a story in English if you don't know the language? Just so you can dream about making money with your writing? Write your story in Indonesian or don't write at all.
It's a good work, I liked how the protagonist is developing, but for some reason from the 51st chapter on all the other chapters are repeating the 34th chapter, despite being written that it will soon be edited, it's been a long time... and still there was no sign of fixing this .... what a pity it is a good work, I hope the author managed to fix this.
Not gonna lie I’m just loving the beginnin of this story I have very high hopes because it can only get better thanks for the great story so far !
I would give you a higher rating but I'm looking through your story sentences and all I'm seeing is repetition. It may not be a bad thing for some people but it can be annoying and a real drop-off if not corrected soon. I've read multiple chapters and all I hear is how they do this but then they do it again but more specifically like "They looked out the gate and they looked harder to look into the gap." I don't know if that bothers some people but it definitely bothers me. Now I'm not saying it should be prefect grammar and everything should be correct but you need to learn how not to repeat the same point multiple times in a sentence using such a small word bunch. Other than that, great work on your book and I look forward to reading your story more!
this story got fun even with there slower start it's fun 10 people surviving the old world they never saw an saving it from monsters its definitely not bad
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Does the mc look like the cover page he doesn’t Even need to have that much arms but the horns he have horns right. Pleas answer if you see this
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I just saw the previous review and to be honest I have to agree with it, for me one of the most exciting things from this book is how the mc will develop, not only development for his character but also for his ability, can't wait to know more about his ability [img=update]