At the beginning the story was promising, Batman in Marvel, interesting, but as the plot develops and specifically the interactions between characters, a rapid decline in quality is noted.
An example of this is the first interaction with MJ (not Mary Jane) it is absurd to think that a teenager would suddenly confess her feelings for a person with a complete stranger.
In addition to the above, things happen in the story without prior explanation, suddenly Alfred is alive (even though in the first chapters it is said that he died) and in the same world as the protagonist Batman.
Another thing I don't like is the incongruity with Batman's overall character revealing his identity as a vigilante the second time he meets someone.
The concept is interesting, but if the author does not correct what seem to me to be these problems, I highly doubt that the story will reach many more chapters. I sincerely hope that I am wrong and that the author is able and willing to write more.
Good luck.
Almost everything does not make any sense whatsoever.
Suddenly is Alfred alive when it was stated that he is dead.
To much time skips and him taking disciples ruined the story
At the beginning the story was promising, Batman in Marvel, interesting, but as the plot develops and specifically the interactions between characters, a rapid decline in quality is noted. An example of this is the first interaction with MJ (not Mary Jane) it is absurd to think that a teenager would suddenly confess her feelings for a person with a complete stranger. In addition to the above, things happen in the story without prior explanation, suddenly Alfred is alive (even though in the first chapters it is said that he died) and in the same world as the protagonist Batman. Another thing I don't like is the incongruity with Batman's overall character revealing his identity as a vigilante the second time he meets someone. The concept is interesting, but if the author does not correct what seem to me to be these problems, I highly doubt that the story will reach many more chapters. I sincerely hope that I am wrong and that the author is able and willing to write more. Good luck.