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作者: HitStick

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Kai Augustine, son of world-renowned Dr. Grace Augustine, back on Earth Kai, was a heavily decorated marine, having almost every medal a living marine could have, now that his time serving his country is up, he decides to follow his mom and join her on Pandora...

No cheats! AU!! Heavy Spoilers!

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Battlexray_Gaming

Author, this is just advice, not for the book, but you, I understand that the book has gained quite some attention but don't feel pressured, put out chapters at your own convinience, and give us some quality chaps, the first chapter does make me await what this fic can become, so know that atleast one of your readers awaits your chapters, whenever they may come.

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SSpextrillex

Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.

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ok_ok_1494

I am giving 4 stars purely because this is the first Avatar fic I have seen, I will rate it differently if I deem it necessary after I have read 10 chapters

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Naturalrocksalt

Been waiting for an avatar fic can’t wait to see what you do with it

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Retro_Plaid

Look forward to This. First thing came to my mind when finishing that amazing movie is “someone should write a fanfiction about this” . I hope u continue this!

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plantsnfrogs

Can’t wait to see what this ends up becoming! I’ve looked for avatar fics in the past and haven’t had any real luck so thanks author!

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Marcia_05

the first Avatar fanfic I find, I needed one for a long time, so far the story is going well as well as the update time, I just hope it stays constant and continues improving as a writer.

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Nathan_Just

Since Kai was a highly regarded marine in his time which can change things, then he could run into other marines he knows or where under his command like Jake on Pandora . Reason I say is because of just having the science group change sides to the Na'vi, you can also have marines do so to.

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Daniel_Silva_3411

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Rick_S4nchez

It's really good I hope it continues with the story as it's the first male avatar story I'm really excited to read it Keep up the great work so far it's perfect

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EC_Wolf
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Enjoyed it so far, minor grammar issues but you seem to be learning so it really doesn't matter, all I ask is that you pace yourself, because I feel like you don't want to abandon this story, so take your time, and write ahead so that you already have chapters and all you need to do is post one and not write the same day, giving yourself a break.

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shadow19972012

please keep it up ..........................................................................

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Charles_Picard

I guess it’s dead since no update in 3 months

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KingBing96

So are you gonna cover both the first and second movie that’d be pretty cool. You’re doing good so keep up the good work. Hope to see new chapters soon.

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MrhMidon

Muito bom autor continue que vc está indo muito bem, espero que continue a publicação desta fanfic, nunca achei uma de avatar tão boa quando a essa, portando continue com o seu bom trabalho

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