/ Book&Literature / Auxiliary Upgrade System Of Douluo Dalu
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Traveling through the world of Douluo, at the beginning of the plot, Lin Feng awakens to assist in upgrading the system.
As long as you do things that can enhance your own strength, you can get experience points!
Even running a walk and sleeping can increase experience points!
[Ding! I had a nightmare when I slept, dreaming that I became a personal soul master who had been practicing for two and a half years, my spiritual power increased slightly, and the experience value +100]
[Ding! After a period of hard practice, the host has mastered the basic axe method, experience value +100]
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The grammar is so bad that 99 percent of the time I am just guessing what's going on. Is this a machine translation or what?,.........................................
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I believe that half the ppl here dont understand what is going on in this novel, it needs to be edited until then2 stars, cus i like the idea
This book have everything you need... awesome work!! keep up the spirit and hope to see more wonderful works from you! The writing was captivating, the characters are believable and I care about them! :)
The writing quality is alright, situational word choice and punc. could be better. The opening chapters serve as exposition for the world and explain the power system, therefore the world development is decent. The pacing seems pretty good too.
To be honest I dont know how to rate this novel. I dont know if the story is that good. Why? Because of the terrible grammar. Even some MTL novels are better translated than this. The story is barely readable with this, truly disappointing.
So this is just an mtl novel that's why you can see they call wuhun and this other names for their ranks. I wouldnt mind if it was copied for mtlnovels but there wasn't any effort to proof read I checked one of the chapters and it was just copied paste from there.
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An absolute unit of a novel! The plot is solid and I am engrossed to read more! Kudos for a job well done! Hope uou don't drop and continue to write. Keep improving all throughout the way. Have a nice day and good luck 👍
another rubbish mtl with a bad translation. and the plot itself completely copies the original. no creativity. protagonist licking dog tang san. I do not advise anyone.
Very bad translation. Completely unreadable. That is a pity. Story is quite promising
Terrible grammar! Terrible grammar! Terrible grammar! Terrible grammar! Terrible grammar! Terrible grammar!
This is a good and normal isekai or reincarnation novel. The characters seem to be good and usual for this type of novel genre. The plot it is great and the stability of update is amazing. You've probably written this a while ago since it is almost impossible to post 50 chapters in almost a week.
Good story, MC have a brain, not pokeman harem. I really like read this. Этот сайт действительно раздражает. Буквально всё сделано чтобы меня разозлить. Боже, неужели нельзя сделать нормальный сайт для людей? Почему русские сайты лучше и удобнее чем это интернациональное дерьмо? Поиск утроен идиотски, чтобы написать отзыв нужно писать 140+ знаков, а звёздочки целых 5 раз ставить...
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Horrible translation, if you don't believe me, search for the story on google, its available on novelhi. quality is much better there.
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0 romance, mc that doesnt kill his enemies, 99% the same soul land story author afraid to change anything...its trash why i read till now i dont know and why are so many bots here