Astral Transcendence

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Shyrlo

This serialized story? I must say, I'm quite proud of how it has unfolded so far. Sure, there have been some bumps along the way, haha but I believe those imperfections add to the charm of it, right? Shamelessly, I'm going to give myself a 5 score review. Lol. Because I'm really enjoying writing this. Of course, I remain grounded and acknowledge that I still have much to learn as a writer. I hope I could see readers invested in my story and leaving comments of anticipation and excitement, it will motivates me to keep going. In the end, I'm humbled by the support and grateful for every reader who has embarked on this journey with me. It's a labor of love, and I couldn't be happier sharing this ATRAS story with the world. I hope it continues to captivate and entertain, as I continue to explore the twists and turns that await in the upcoming chapters. Thanks everyone.

I'm not really good with giving review but this story definitely a hidden gem. The earlier chapters did well describing the MC. I love when he use his wit's instead of just brawn. I can't wait to see him grow stronger. The characters are fun to read, especially Garen. Also I like the setting of the trial. The author did well explaining it naturally. Definitely, I recommend this story to everyone who's seeking an adventure, action and smart MC.

So, this is my review for the story. I loves the MC already. The way his brain always thinking and using everything he have to make sure he got what he wants. I also like where he was an ambiguous person but at the same time a realist where he act based on what will benefits him the most. The MC being a genius doesn't feel like the author was forcing him to be that way. Or even lowering the IQ's of other characters to make the MC stand out. This is how I want a story of smart MC should be. Definitely, recommend this. Can't wait to see what's more to come from this fable.

LV 1

DaoisthY5KLF

A simple but packed introduction to the mc and the game world....a unique interpretation to augmented and virtual reality....cant wait to see how the story unfolds...are the players trapped inside the game like sao???

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SpaceBoy

Great start, what a way of introducing the MC. Less grammar error and good English proficiency. The plots seemed interesting. Not to forget that the world building is also compelling. This is my early review for now for the first 2 chapters. I want moreee chapters!!!

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Danish_Nazli

Flawless writing and amazing storyline. If there was titles for storytelling, this would be the maestro in the world of storytelling as it unfolds a beautiful story line as the story gets deeper and beyond. Would recommend to all age of readers especially to young readers and those who just started getting into e-novels

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Herlyn_

This is my review, as a friend, I'm really proud of this! I love the balances of comedy, emotional, and action in this novel. I also love the characters, they are such a joy to read! Especially, Garen!! Anyway, this is very promising, Ngl. Keep it up!!

Nice story i really love it the best story beautiful storyline good character. Interesting plot. The author is talented. I hope this novel will be loved and read by countless people

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Mesarik

Raynold is a hard gamer, already a connection with most readers :D It's good that he uses his brain instead of overwhelming power. Garen is also a very nice character, his in genuine interest keeps it fresh form the classical evil Mod that runs the trial.

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DaoistsTuaHQ

This story is really promising. It is not your ordinary/typical isekai or op MC. It comes with unique and versatile plots and characters. I hope the writer will continue uploading this masterpiece.

LV 3

Dixerqua

Finally, it's about time for me to share my review, don't you think? First of all the story is well-crafted which keeps me intrigued about what's going to happen next. Then there's the inclusion of emotional moments adds a sense of adaptability to the narrative. The complexity of the game may not appeal to everyone, but enthusiasts of literature and those who enjoy action/game genres will undoubtedly love it to the core. Keep going hero!

This novel can be catogarized as the best novel i have ever read,the plot and creativity of the storyline enhance the quality of the story and this is great for education purpouse also due to many rare volcabulary used and i bet the writer would have done a great job on publishing this novel..worth reading🤭

I took off a star from Writing Quality because I think the author often uses more complicated prose when simpler language would be better. It makes it harder to read smoothly. In short, it feels a little clunky at times. The other star I took off was from Character Design. Overall I feel like the characters are well-written, but I would have been more engrossed if I could get inside the head of the protagonist more. For example, when he meets The Guidance he 'teases' it with cookies, then gives it a nickname. If he is intentionally 'teasing' it, what is his goal? It doesn't seem like it's unintentional though, because it would indicate a naivete and frivolity that doesn't seem to fit. He's glib, maybe a little flippant, but not stupid. Anyway, I think the main character is lacking some depth, emotion, and internal conflict, but overall it's very good. I look forward to seeing where this goes!

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Nitefall_

A dreamy, fantastical, but heartfelt journey into another world. The characters have fun dynamics that are explored alongside the world that Shyrlo subtly builds up throughout the story. Highly recommend 👍