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概要
In a Cultivation Bug World where cultivators can form a symbiotic relationship with bug beasts to access the natural energy auras.
Lived life as an arrogant cultivation young master, Lin Baal swore and made it his resolution to not show any weaknesses as long as he could stay as a young master forever. But one day, he stumbled upon a device that allows him to communicate and chat with his Alternate universe selves and these other versions of himself in alternate universes have amazing titles, powers, and knowledge of things he didn't know.
Lin Baal became horrified and angered when he found out that he will just become a stepping stone as it is written on every young master's fate like him. Fortunately, he discovered that he could download things and skills of his impressive other-selves in Chat Group.
With those skills and things he would/could download, he will use it against fate and murder other high-level young masters to keep his position while going against the main character of this world!
"I, LIN BAAL! AM THE MOST COMPLETE YOUNG MASTER IN ALL EXISTENCE!!!"
Warning:
Arrogant/Prideful young master MC.
Not so much of a comedy unless I make my MC an idiot to make it more fun but I don't like it.
I also appreciate the comments.
Chapters: 1.5 - 2K words, 1 - 3 chap/a day
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At 60 chapters the things you can expect are: A cliche cocktail Bootleg Pokemon A mixed world of generic Japanese Isekai and cultivation. Any single one of these should be something that can potentially ruin a story yet the author somehow makes it work. I have to say bravo it takes real skill to do such a thing, at first I was hesitant due to the Pokemon bootleg part in the synopsis but after reading it I loved it.
Después de ver todos los capítulos. Puedo decir que esa novela es buena. Tiene buenos personaje, el joven maestro aunque aveces sus ideas son raras son geniales....es interesante. Si tengo que decir algo malo con esta novela es sin duda la gramática...muchas veces me se me dificulta entender una línea. Por último esta una sugerencia por si al autor se le acaba las ideas para los capítulos siguientes, puede hacer un Pov sobre los personajes del chat grupal....y creo que leí por ahí que constantemente se unirán nuevos miembros, será bastante interesante leer sobre eso y así si al autor se le acabas las ideas puede escribir sobre eso y no dejar caer la novela. En fin...buena novela sigue así.
yo fam, your story's premise is interesting but it lacks polishing, like the writing has so many mistakes I'm not a master of English myself as its my third language, but recently I have an urge to try and dip my toes in editing hit me up if you want a free editor, I can try to minimize the grammar mistakes I can't guarantee the quality doe
Finally I've been waiting for this young master stepping stone realizing he is Stepping Stone of mc and trying to change his fate. Very good novel recommended to try it.
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IT HAS AMAZING CONCEPTS. AND MC IS FUNNY IN HIS OWN WAY. HOWEVER, THERE IS SOME PROBLEMS WITH WRITING OR TRANSLATION. THE WIRTING STYLE IS A BIT LOOPY AND SOMEWHAT LOOSE? I DON'T KNOW IF THAT IS THE RIGHT WORD. WHAT I MEAN IS IT IS EASY TO READ, BUT HARD TO UNDERSTAND.
huehuehue instant 5 star from me i expect to see my fellow brethren stopping toads from eating swan meat, slapping peasants with wads of cash and preaching the Dao of my father/grandfather/sect will curb stomp you
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I'll invite everyone in the GC (Invite ko lahat sa GC, gagu ka may bagong novel ka nanaman hahahahahahaha) _ f d d _ d d d d d d d d d_ d d d d. ..
Good concept and quite a good development but the writing quality is terrible,after reading I feel like I consumed all my braincells just to eve understand what is the author saying
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I was enjoying it, but webnovel decided to axe all works fast pass so I wont be able to read this anymore, sigh.......... ???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????why,webnovel why??????????????????????????????????????????
With my humble opinion that is my own which does not intend to disregard anyother persons view and opinions the man in the cover looks like he is the main character of a Manhwa named "Crazy Demon's Return. That is all
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objectively Your English sucks, I even got loss in confusion and had to re-read several chapters just to understand the sentences and grammar. Grammarly should fix that, it's a mobile app. now, that's not to say the ploy sucks, I find the difference of the mc and I's perspective intriguing and engaging. the updates is fine, and the quality is good compared to the other xian xia, sure it's predictable but it's still entertaining . the only hindrance is your writing .
Basahin ko pag marami na Chapter. naknang naka ilang ulit ako ng lagay waly parin tong post button. Woooooooooooolkkkkkkkkkoooooooooooooooooooo
From facebook, hehe the descriotion is cool, I love it.... I'll read this because sounds promising after I download ghe app. Hehe areogant young master strikes back
This story is about Cultivation Bugs/Gu, Pokemon, and Symbiosis. I hope I could continue, I don't like comedy but the title and the synopsis forces me to 😅😅😅😅😅