Arms trough the galaxy

LV 13

Nimav

The premise is good, the system makes sense and it does have an exploit suitable for galactic level conflicts if he keeps properly developing. The writing has problems, feels very ADHD: - MCs initial exploration of his environment had great ideas and setup regarding language and cultural barriers (different calendar, different currency etc. which was a great set-up for initial discovery), but all that setup goes down the drain when all of a sudden MC is just described as having figured out exactly where and especially when he is (no one uses BBY in....well....BBY, and MC isn't set up like someone who would automatically know 968 After Ruusan, or 3 After Great Resync automatically means 33 BBY) before anything immediately identifiable can be mentioned (like Jabba). - At one point characters talk about some things as if they were already set when they shouldn't have been, like betting for Anakin when it wasn't clear he was even entered into the race (which he shouldn't have been). -The fights are pretty good I think but the focus sometimes switches from the fight itself to very detailed descriptions of the weapons he's about to use or conjure, killing some of the fight's suspense. Overall it has great potential I think and great setups worth exploring by the author, but it's like he gets bored of his own creativity and skips ahead to the action by throwing a simple description of what happened rather than taking us on the journey with the MC. Then again, this is webnovel and that kind of environment building might not be as appreciated as it should be.