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ARCANE: The Dark Misfit

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作者: popyStyko

4.68 (18 レビュー結果)

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'It's crazy how someone who used to be a huge part of your life. . .can be gone in a second' -unknown
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A once pure and happy child, made an amazing discovery that made the whole world give him the title 'Genius Inventor' as his invention was truly world changing. . .
he 'was' happy. . .life 'was' going well for him and his family. . . yet fate decided to make this poor child face a cruel experience. . .
losing all his loved ones, constantly running away, making sure he has the sufficient strength to protect himself. . . his sanity is slowly losing bit by bit as he grew up doing this without rest.
As he was doing this over and over again. . .he lost his sanity and finally. . .he died.

'but wait! there seems to be something wrong!'
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In the dark alleyways inside the harsh city of Zaun, you can see a young boy with bruise all over his body laying down on the dirty ground seemingly dead. . .
but. . .his body suddenly jerked up, heavy breathing could be heard escaping from his mouth.
'huh?'
'didn't I die?!'
'WHERE AM I?!'
watch as he tries to overcome fate's cruel plan in this new world. . .

[A.N: sup guys! styko here, this is my first time writing so I really really need you guys to tell me if i'm doing good so far. If possible, I want you guys to suggest how I improve my writing skills, so just write a review about it, imma comment :D, well that's all i'm going to say, hope you enjoy my novel!]
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I don't own the Arcane characters, except my oc. . .

if you're the original artist of the cover, pls contact me if u want it taken down! :D

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popyStyko

Im gonna put 5 stars cause why not? no i'm joking, I think my writing is pretty good but not that amazing, probably needs a little bit of editing here and there, but it's alright i'm sure my writing will improve soon as I write more chapters. . . I hope you will enjoy my fanfic of Arcane, if so, please write a review and tell me what you think thankyou[img=recommend][img=recommend], and thank you for the readers who supported me on my first chapter, that gave me a motivation to continue this, so once again thank you

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Papa_Otter

good for the first chapter, but there's a lot of information that are missing, but if iits overed soon then good, expecting good novel. NO HAREM, NO HAREM, NO HAREM, NO HAREM, NO HAREM, NO HAREM, NO HAREM.

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Savage_writer

amazing Dope .. keep the cool author I'm loving this Book [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Azure04

5/5 ! That was amazing!! .. Gotta add it into my reading list.. Will be looking forward to the upcoming chapters╰(⸝⸝⸝´꒳`⸝⸝⸝)╯ I liked the way you described the setting of the plot! Good work!!

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Surbhi_mithil

The narrative is easy to understand with no grammar errors and stable updates so far. I like content with great synopsis and the character development is superb anyone could completely feel that they are real in how the author portrayed them. Great work author

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AliAli2123

this story has the potential to be great, i'm looking forward to a good plot as i read more into it, good job author [img=recommend], you're doing amazing

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_Rockbison_

Nice plot... I like the writting of author... It seems like very interesting story... So please upload more so that l can read more🤭🤭 Keep going... You are doing well

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obiparadise_purity

I'm giving this book five stars because the author deserves it, I'm not usually a fan of this kind of book but yours was different, I really enjoyed it and hope the author keeps it up.

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InstaMoist

Honestly, I just like playing League of Legends and Legends of Runeterra and don't know the history of the world or the story behind the characters. Because there are only 4 chapters, there is not much to comment on, but I want to ask, is he still on earth now? Because I'm a little confused about what's going on. Because at first, I thought he was in Zaun, and all the assassination plots and events made it plausible that he wasn't on earth anymore. Then he met a grandma who could use qi? Whatever it is, maybe my brain is the problem because I haven't slept all night.

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Breyner

Your novel has grabbed me from the first moment, I can't wait to see more chapters and enjoy them. I hadn't read in this App for a while, but now I know what to entertain myself with.

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Sweet_Vanilla553

Sure enough, I love this. But is not any more updates🥺 any ways, keep going author. Support this and recommended...🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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Scorpious_star

Autor-nim... You made me loose my mind here... I meann Wow 👏🏼👏🏼 I really enjoyed each and every part of the book. Wonderful way of writing... I need more and more 🥳

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author_zia

Everything is perfect, I love the way it is beautifully written. Keep up the good work author ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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DaoistTmctqf

love the story so far👍! still waiting for the next chapters😁![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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SCarew

Amazing work, great character development. enjoy the story from every step and it was an enjoyable read . Writer did an outstanding work with the story

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Sneakycat098

Great story so far, however I suggest author to improve the writing skills in terms of vocabulary since the flow is quite disturbed when it comes to reading. With keeping that in mind, thing have been described very elaborately and the plot is intriguing as well. I wish author best of luck for the upcoming chapters[img=recommend]

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Lyzel_Zellie

I'm loving this story right from the beginning. I enjoy how you're really enthusiastic in bringing out a flow to your plot. Keep writing, I'll be here to support you. You're with no doubt a very candid author. I recommend it to all authors and readers.😊❤️

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DeKin
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Great for the first chapter, keep up the hard work popystyko I’l be here to watch you become na amazing author :) keep up the good luck bro

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