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Very cliche novel, with no clear goal and garbage op mc, please don't read I wrote it when I was 14
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Hello, the author here,I'm giving myself a biased 5 stars, obviously. This novel will receive at least 7 chapters weekly, up to 14 chapters weekly at maximum. The MC is a very op person, who has lived through three other lives, one in the Naruto World, one in an Immortal World, and the first one in the same world as us. Hopefully you like it, it's a bit slow paced, and the pairing is Xiao Ning'er x MC (Shen Tian).
I just found this, and I have to say; it’s great!! I already liked your Naruto fanfic, but it lacked the cultivation aspect that i’m craving recently, so this fiction will be a great snack. Thanks for the meal ;P
Decent idea, bad execution. The way the story flows feels unnatural and even the "sudden death" of his father feels bland and not enough to stimulate the reader's emotions as we haven't grown attached to the character. I recommend to have shown his plans one by one as part of the story instead of dumping it all in one go, readers want to read story, not info dumps.
Writing Quality 3/5 - writing is not perfect but the message is there and you can understand the story flow enough to enjoy the story.. Stability of Updates 4/5 - pretty good update rate...its 16 now but when i found it a few days back it only had like 9 so pretty fast Story Development 3/5 - pretty good premise and direction, rated only a 3 are there are some points where other readers point out that feels a bit.. well not forced but strange Character Design 3/5 - its a fanfic where author needs to portray characters of a different author in the right way so 3 is a good number World Background 4/5 - it is essentially the TDG world with various elements from other fictions i can take inconsistency with the plot or character behavior.... one thing i cant take is inconsistency in mechanic and forcing something to happen but when you look at it... it doesnt really work...changed my review, it still the same just changed some of the unreasonable things i wrote lol....
Don't expect this novel to be like every other fanfic, where the MC actually knows about the world he got sent to, while also being overpowered. But for me I like those types of fanfics where the MC actually knows the world he got reincarnated into, and he takes advantage of future events that are going to happen. Of course a Little OPness never hurt nobody. Many people might say that the one thing this novel has going for it is that it has no harem. Which for me I don't mind either way, as long as it's a good story. But for me this novel has a lot of problems from the very beginning. In the first chapter he's described as someone who has been reincarnated multiple times. One of those worlds being the Naruto World, which he knew about before hand. He has also lived Millions if not billions of years. During all that time he has accumulated millions of years of knowledge and experience. The author gave him this OP background, where the MC was actually at the top of the food chain in his previous worlds. But then comes the next chapters and he dumb's down the MC and nerfs his abilities. He nerfs him so hes not so OP early on, but doing that disregards how stuff works like chakra. He also dumb's him down when hes supposed to be the smartest person in all the universe. Whats the point of giving him a background like that just to nerf him. Why not just give him a not so overpowered background or do the old cliche "he lost his memories" then over time unlock them to make him stronger. You would think being in a different world of cultivation. He would want to get stronger, because he does not know what may happen. I mean he knows nothing about this world so he knows nothing about future events, and him having lived in other worlds of cultivation were the strong pray on the weak. You would think he would be in a hurry to get stronger so that nothing unexpected happens that's out of his control, but he doesn't. He has the mind set of "Will see what happens". He doesn't act how you would think some one that has accumulated so much experiences in his many years of life would act. At times the MC is smart and at times he's dumb, he's inconsistent. He has certain skills where you wonder why he isn't taking advantage of them like the Clone Jutsu of Naruto's. There's just too much stuff that doesn't add up and i would be writing forever. So I just can't keep reading it anymore. Score wise I'm giving the writing quality a 4-star. It wasn't too good to start, but it got better over time. Stability updates I'm giving it a 3-star. I went and looked at his recent updates to see how frequent hes updating. It doesn't look too stable but it's good enough Story development for me is a 2-star. MC was dumb down so it Sort of ruined it from there for me, and the pace is too slow. It feels like it's at least three times slower than the original novel. Character design 1-star. What's the point in giving him an OP background just to dumb him down and nerf him. World development 2-star. What is there to say about this. Its basically the same world as the original. From what I have read he hasn't done much to change it yet. You may like it but, i just don't so this is my review.
So like can the mc even use his knowledge from his past life to help himself improve in this world? I mean each world has different concept, laws, energy to manipulate, ways to become strong , etc. No before that, will he even retain his memory after reincarnating
Wow i really Hope that there is more chapter comming from this one than the original You're doing great in a lot of different book but all of them are great Keep up the good work :-) Thanks a lot
Perfect. I love it. The only thing this novel needs is more chapters. Please don't drop this one OR rush the story either, like you did the other one.
Nice story ☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺ Don't drop ☺☺☺☺☺☺😑😑😑😑😆😆😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
welp...................................................................140 characters this is not a member of the 5% if you dont know what this mean.... you havent read enough fanfic or just brushup on tvtropes
Best fanfic of Tales of the demon and gods, using his past life from naruto to use chakra and the important is no unreasonable power up from system, like getting sharingan. Harem please,I know some people don't like harem but when you read non-harem novel with great heroine development you will realise harem is the only choice hahahaha Keep up the good work Thanks
Alright i really like your story like REALLY like your story, but your pace is bit slow in my opinion, so if you can move it bit faster then this is perfect because i want to see the reaction of mc who just reincarnated But good story, keep the good work
Billion year mc somehow falls for an underage girl with no personality other than being a tsundere that constantly blushes at every word of mc and has a medical problem with her sweat glands that make her sweat every other paragraph, which makes her clothes stick to her body. Also the pacing sucks.
For me, I can call this fanfic decent to be read. It can fill my times when there's nothing else to read. Though I don't know if it can be considered to be good, at last it's not bad. Maybe there are slight flaw here and there, but it's not unbearable. For writing quality, I can't give any comment. Since my english is not that good. But for me, since I can understand the story, I think it's good or decent at least. For updates stability, honestly I'm gratified this work has more than 100 chapters. Hopefully, the author will not drop this work midway. For story development. I think it's not bad. But, actually I think the author can be more in depth to write about some event. Since some event that can be interesting if written more slight in depth just being waste in haste in my oppinion. For example, the part about Shen Hong death. When I finish read that part I was like, "ahhh... So he is dead now". It's feel like there's suppose to be more interresting scene that can be presented. Afterall, Shen Hong can be called the first village boss/ cannon fodder. There's no need to be a difficulty in defeating him since the premis here is OP MC. But there can be slight more interesting plot or event in it. For character design. The MC, Shen Tian was a (how much his age again?) Billion aged immortal, with high wishdom, intellegent, knowledge, etc. But the taste he has is not like that. He is just teenager with cold feeling is what I feel from his very actions, reasonings, and justifications. Something just feel not quite right. Though I myself cannot pinpoint what it is (sorry for irresponsible remark). For world background. Yeah, this part I'm also unable to give any comment. Since I also doesn't have idea if it's good. Since it was a fanfic that took TDG world background as the frame. Overall for me, compared to worst fanfic, this work is not the worst. Neither this was very bad fanfic. Some moment reading the story can pique my interest. But there are also some moment where i feel it's too haste in event development that result in failling to present interesting plot. Note: I'm not professional in giving review. But this is what I think about this story right now. Hope this can contribute to this story since I'm quite supporting it.
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This is my personal opinion. Honestly this story contains most of the things I disliked in the original tales of gods and demons and the naruto stuff does not help. I feel that the characters advance to quickly especially the main character who basically radiates invincibility. It does update quickly and the chapters have good length
Really good, I look forward to the continuation! He falls into my library without hesitation the other story of tdg bored me! 140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...
Both characters, our OG mc & OC mc, are total trash. But trash-trash cancel each other out so....good novel!! 5 STARS!!! Yay!!!! So............
It is by far one of the worse fan fiction of this type. The MC, supposedly, HUNDREDS of MILLIONS years old, lacks common sense and basic survival instinct. The most annoying part of this novel? It's not an improvement, it's not even a different story from the original. It follows the same steps and arcs with a different MC, he even fights the same evil family (which he is a member off), that the original MC fights at first. To finish, the MC is the weakest part of this novel and due to it not being original its not worth the time reading further which is why the low score on story (being the same as original), character design and world background are a copy.
I expected to at least enjoy this fanfic, but I really can't. The beginning of the story is somewhat okay, MC lived on earth, died, reincarnated in a cultivation world, died, reincarnated in a Naruto world, he became strongest there and died. After his death he must have thought "Wow, I died and managed to fuse spirit and soul energy, I should just detonate my spread out energy, just what could go wrong?" Then he is reincarnated in TDG world as a member of Shen family, a son of OC (brother of the current patriarch). And surprise, his soul is damaged, he manages to get elixirs from his father to repair it faster. He knows that his father was poisoned by his uncle, he started to heal him, but what could go wrong when his father must go on a dangerous expedition? He could have given him some pills to help him a bit, it may not have mattered at all, but he just didn't bother to do it, because "What could go wrong?". His father dies, like some random thug, his sole role was to give him elixirs, but it didn't really matter. MC can repair his soul in one year, what does the author decide to do, heal him forcefully because why not? As a side effect, he can't cultivate in next 4 years. The author said that MC is cold and calculating, and because of that he can't have a harem, yet he doesn't mind his arranged marriage. The MC was cultivating for billions of years, but he supposedly isn't a "cultivation maniac", if he isn't one then who is? He doesn't have ane purpose, a goal, everything he does feels like he just came up with, I cultivated this technique in 2 of my lives, it's really great, but I don't feel like doing it this life. He decides to cultivate untested technique, because why not? And all of this logic discrepancies wouldn't matter as much if our MC who lived for billions of years didn't behave like a retarded kid who can do something intelligent when the author feels like it.
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