/ Book&Literature / An heir for a legacy
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Meet Alexis a guy reborn in Harry Potter world and his life their after he discovered some very interesting news
***I do not own anything written in this fic except my OC characters.***
English isn’t my first language
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writing quality could be far better. I honestly don't care about grammer much,if my reading flow doesn't get interrupted. But,this style of story telling makes the experience worst. Please try to improve the way of story telling. Then,it will compensate a lot even if your world background and character design is a bit lacking. And even though I don't know about your story development and update stability... I hope it will get much better.. Thank you for writing....
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Grammar and punctuation do not exist. You will have to guess if a character is speaking out loud sometimes. Decent story. Needs an editor, badly.