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"A Luna likes you needs to be killed!"
The Alpha stood in front of me. He scanned my body as it was shaking in hunger and in great fear. Alpha Winston was already about to transform into a wolf and killed me.
"Please, I am kneeling in front of you to beg not to kill me. I will serve you and remained as a slave of you, just to let me live." My tears was falling from my face, until it reach to the edge. "What do I need to do just to prove it."
Alpha Winston's face was now turned into a wolf, as well as his hand and some part of his stomach. He continued to stare at me and was about to kill me.
He then lowered his gaze, and was letting his face to be near me. "What did you told me? I hate you and I would not let you live. The blood running in your body was strong enough to prove that you needed to be killed."
I shook my head and slowly close my eyes. "I agreed that I was an enemy. But I can prove that you need me, even if you hated me. Just do it as fate let me come here in your pack."
"I need a Luna, I do not need a slave like you."
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First of all, I want to tell you that this was a good novel. This is the first novel in this genre that I am reading since I want a billionaire romance novel, but this makes me hooked! I highly recommend it to others to read this
Here is my review! It is not compulsory, but I want to review! The story has a nice plot, and I understand the way the write writes the novel, well, it was all good, the development of the story are good as well, so yeah, I still continued reading this, Mirabella will no longer be hate by the Alpha someday! finger 🤞
Over all, the perspective of this novel is great. It has the potential as I know the character was build strongly, creating a create chemistry, especially we know why the Alpha hated the Luna .
Most authors give 40 free chapters. This one only 18. So many mistakes and really hard to read. Not just grammar, but many sentences you have to guess what they are saying. And that is only the first 18 chapters.
Thank you so much for the wonderful novel. I love it despite the flaws and imperfections within it, I loved it so much! ......................
I love your book, good work......................................................................................................................
So I am here to finally give my review. So I want to start with the plot. Some are typical, but the flow was nice. I highly recommend it for you all
What a nice story! I cannot wait for the author to update the novel. Look like Alpha Winston was really doing his best to hate Luna Mirabella but we all know that he will fall for her at the end, or perhaps not depending the plot of the Author.
the werewolf novel that I was finding for. oh la la la it has the best alpha and was being portrayed well by Winston, like me as a reader also feels like the main character and slowly falling in love with Alpha Winston.
The book sure has a captivating synopsis but the writing quality and its development are horrible ..
I couldn't get through chapter 2. The story itself could have promise, but I can't get past the clunky, awkward writing and words like "pertain" being used in ways that make it clear the author doesn't know what that really means. People speak in a way that just isn't natural or realistic, so it just feels awkward to read. There isn't really much world or character setting it just immediately throws us into dialogue.
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hello author, my review for this was good, but I think there are still excitement awaits for us in the following chapter. I will always tell readers to try this .
the updating stability of this novel was too cool, Everytime I open, it always says that it is updated a minute a go like it was a great timing I was opening the app, good luck author!
anyway, my experience was good for this novel. everyone had different experience, but this is what I want to read and was letting me hooked, wanting me to read more
this is a good story, hope you will like it all. you know this is also good thing. Also, there is an interesting part of the story. This is not just an ordinary Alpha story.