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章 12: Notice

I am sorry, but I couldn't go on with this fic as it is. I know myself well enough to know when I am about to start a huge mess and this fic has all possible signs of it. So instead of trying to fix it I will simply start anew. A new version of it is already out and I would like if you all could at least take a look at it, I promise it will not be bad at all as this time I actually am planning ahead.

The premise is quite similar but the situation will be different and the cultivation world will also include the Soul Cultivation and Body Cultivation as a part of it, heavily inspired by the cultivation in Martial World that honestly is much better explained than in ATG when it comes to Body and Soul cultivations.

But, if anyone knows some other work which has a more well-explained Soul Forging aspect to it please tell otherwise I just might do something like using Soul Land (Douluo Dalu) method or just keep it vaguer than I would have liked.

Anyway, another change is that the MC will have ten inheritances from the get-go and no more inheritances from Nasuverse. One for each main class, one from Avenger, one from Ruler, and one for Beast (and no, it is not Goetia, everyone just talks about Goetia but I can't imagine how to even use him without make him too broken to be of use and he is completely demonic and in ATG being demonic isn't exactly a good thing).

Thanks, and I already posted two chapters of this new fic so go check them out.


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