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I have been introduced into the wonderful RWBY community and it has inspired me to write my own fan fiction of my own team. So thank you guys so much! Hey also if you would like to reach me you can talk to me on Discord. My name is Megagamer4life... I know sounds kinda lame but I made it when I was 12 okay.
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A decent first chapter all around, although I will say I thought it was a bit too short, so I would recommend trying to increase your word count for future chapters. I'm sure Marigold and her team will turn out to be interesting characters!