Good writing. It's a pleasure how the words flow. The idea of the story is so so (for me). I like the freedom he want but the "system"/"shop" is... I don't know, somewhat out of place. But as chapter 8 he has yet to use it, so I wonder how the author will do.
It's not an OP character, even if the "golden fingers" he has are fastening the growth. So far is overall good, I hope autor doesn't drop it.
Good writing. It's a pleasure how the words flow. The idea of the story is so so (for me). I like the freedom he want but the "system"/"shop" is... I don't know, somewhat out of place. But as chapter 8 he has yet to use it, so I wonder how the author will do. It's not an OP character, even if the "golden fingers" he has are fastening the growth. So far is overall good, I hope autor doesn't drop it.