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章 4: Greatest Disciple!

[Welcome Host!]

A woman's voice sounded in Li Renjie's head

"..."

[Ehm, Welcome Host~]

The voice sounded again, trying to sound pleasant and friendly.

"...…."

[Bastard! Are you deaf?! Huh?!]

Li Renjie's head was reeling!

Why?!

Why would this happen?!

A system!!!

And one with a personality at that!

Li Renjie couldn't take it and collapsed to his knees!

"Nooooooooo!!!"

The golden chicken startled by his sudden outburst jumped away looking quite displeased!

Mirrors should be mirrors!

How dare they move on their own?!

Insolent!

The chicken's claws began to glow with a dazzling light, it would teach this mirror a lesson!

Li Renjie was completely unaware he had offended an arrogant and violent chicken. He was lost in his thoughts as an incessant voice rang out in his head.

[Host, you should be thanking me! Had it not been for my quick actions you would have died on impact!]

'Thank you, now leave!' Li Renjie shot back in his mind. Not caring about if the words were true or not.

He wouldn't tolerate the presence of this thing!

[Huh?! Bastard! I can sense your hate for me! Why?! What did I ever do to you?!]

'Are you a system or just some random woman trapped in my head?!'

[Host, listen well I am the 'Greatest Disciple of All Time System!' I'll take you to the top of the world!]

'What greatest disciple of all time?! Screw that! I'm starting a mafia! I'm gonna be a big boss!!!'

[Pssh! How? You have no cultivation! Hahaha! Good luck! Who would listen to a weakling like you? Hahaha!]

A melodic laugh sounded causing Li Renjie's to flinch.

'I still have my eyes!'

[Guh…]

[You need me! Also I have gifts and…]

'I don't need anything from you! Now leave! Please and thank you! Kind enough for you?!' Li Renjie cut the voice off before it could finish.

[Host an emergency mission shall be issued now!]

'Nooo!!!'

However, just before the system could continue a blinding golden light pulled its and Li Renjie's attention.

The golden chicken was about to cough blood!

This bastard actually dared to ignore it!

Without any cultivation this dammed child actually ignored it! It had wanted to give him a chance to be a good little mirror and yet he did not take the opportunity!

Li Renjie seemed to sense the chicken's hostility and took a step back.

"What the hell? What's wrong with you?!" he lashed out at the chicken, wanting to vent.

First the hero, then the system, and now this chicken!

All his plans were going to hell!

"Bkaaa!!!"

The chicken wanted to attack but staring at the child's eyes it couldn't bring itself to destroy such a treasure. It would give him one more chance! Lifting up one of its wings, it pointed towards a small rock before cocking its beak towards Li Renjie.

The look of disdain unconcealed.

Its meaning was all too clear.

Sit down and behave.

Li Renjie paused seeing this.

This chicken was a bit too arrogant; did he encounter some sort of freak?

Still, his eyes suddenly began to shine as a smile came to his face.

'This is a good time to test it out,' he thought to himself.

Quietly he began to get a feel for his eyes, it was a strange feeling. Starting at the chicken he could see 'it', it was faint and a bit hazy be he could still see it.

That was enough.

He just needed but a thought to activate his first skill!

His attention gradually went towards his left eye and he could see 'it' a bit clearer.

It all felt so natural for him, as if he were born with these eyes!

He knew exactly what to do! After all they were his creation!

The chicken seeing him smile began to rage, clearly misunderstanding!

This bastard was actually laughing at it! Did he think it wouldn't attack?!

Enough was enough!

Its claws flickered with a faint golden light as it began to lunge forward!

Just a claw would be sufficient to deal with this insect!

Li Renjie quickly acted! His left eye started to glow with a brilliant silver light as water like ripples began to gently radiate from his one of his two pupils!

In his left eye, a perfect reflection of the chicken could be seen!

Fwwshh!

A thin silver light quickly shot out his left eye and collided with golden claw!

His left eyes first ability!

Moon in the Lake!

Bang!!

Gold and silver lights clashed!

The impact caused a small explosion!

"Argh!" Li Renjie shouted as he was blasted back by the pressure wave!

The golden chicken stumbled back a few steps; shock evident in its eyes. Looking ahead, it saw something unbelievable!

A chicken!

A brilliant silver chicken with a crown of feathers!

!!!!!

The golden chicken was dumbfounded!

That silver chicken was clearly a copy of itself! Other than the color, everything else was the same!

Even the arrogance and disdain in its eyes were identical!

How?!

The child clearly had no cultivation!

"Cough! Cough!" Li Renjie coughed up blood as he lay in the snow. He had been blasted over thirty plus feet away!

'Dammit! Why is my body so weak?'

He once again took notice of his small frame but knew that now wasn't the time. His left eye was beginning to hurt and gradually dimming down.

Looking ahead he noticed the two-chicken staring at each other.

At that moment, the light in his left eye went out completely and the silver chicken began to turn into specks of silver light before fading away!

"Why did it vanish?!" Li Renjie was stunned as he struggled to stand.

[Hahaha, what a boss! Can't even take on a chicken! Hahaha!]

A happy voice rang out in his head once again.

'Must you kick a man while he's down?!'

[You asked for it! Trying to use your bloodline with such a weak body and no understanding of cultivation! Ha! No matter how amazing your eyes are, you still need to be capable enough to use them!]

'….' Li Renjie couldn't respond. She was right, he had lost his cultivation manual, he couldn't make best use of his eyes.

[Worry not, I can get you out of this situation and help you increase your strength! Here's a show of my goodwill~]

The system spoke casually before Li Renjie felt a soothing sensation course through his body, after which his chest didn't ache as much, and he could breathe somewhat regularly again.

'….and what would I have to do?' he said after feeling the changes.

[Simple! Become the greatest disciple of all time! That is my duty!]

Li Renjie remained silent, he quietly looked up at the chicken that seemed to have regained its bearings. After seeing he appeared to be injured it began to very slowly walk over to him, a cautious look in its eyes. Sighing to himself he accepted reality, he had not cultivation or manuals to learn from, no teacher or mentor, nothing.

He had designed his eyes to work in harmony with his cultivation manual, now it would appear he had walked into rock and a hard place. Why did he have to run into a psychotic chicken? He could have had some time to consider his options had he been luckier. Sighing to himself, he quickly made his decision.

'Fine…but I have one requirement.'

[Let's hear it.]

'You can't stop me from forming my organization.'

[…..]

'Take it or no deal!'

[Fine…as long as you accomplish all the missions given to you, what you do on your own time is your business. However! It cannot reflect badly on your master or sect! You have to be the greatest!]

'Fine, you have a deal!'

[System requirements met! Distributing welcome gifts!]

[Host has received 3 escape talismans – Destination is random]

[Host has received 3 one-time defense talismans effective up to Peak - Revolving Sea Realm!]

[Host has received Super Legendary Deluxe gift! One 'Fake It till you Make It!' charm!]

[Host has received Super Legendary Deluxe gift! One drop of Lunar Glacial Water!]

As the notifications rang off Li Renjie couldn't help but marvel, perhaps systems have some merit after all. After receiving the items he noticed that they had all been suddenly appeared within his mind. He could summon them freely.

How strange.

Was this the so-called system storage space?

However after glancing at the talismans he quickly realized he had no idea what the revolving sea realm was or how powerful the chicken was, he couldn't chance that. As for the drop of water and the ridiculous sounding charm, after seeing the other two talismans he ignored them.

'Should I use my right eye?'

After a brief moment he shook his head, there was clearly a better option.

At the same time the golden chicken had arrived in front of him. It looked curiously at his eyes, seeming to notice how strange they truly were.

Did humans have two pupils in their eyes?

Why were they like silver mirrors?

It couldn't recall a single one with similar eyes.

Just as it was thinking, a faint blue light flashed in front of the young child.

It was a piece of paper: square and black.

Drawn on it was circle made up of complex and strange looking symbols; shimmering, they appeared to be drawn with an iridescent blue ink.

The chicken retreated after feeling the violent spatial fluctuations emitting from the talisman.

"Little bastard, I will have my revenge!" Li Renjie shouted before shattering the talisman with his mind!

His entire body and the area just around him were suddenly covered in a strange rippling bubble.

From the outside looking in, it appeared as if he and everything within the bubble were being twisted and warped!

Before the chicken could react, the bubble burst and the boy disappeared in a flash of blue light!

The chicken was startled before realizing it had been conned!

The brat had escaped!

"Bkaaa!!!"

The chicken cursed before adding another name to its list!

Another feud had been formed!


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