/ Anime & Comics / Across The Multiverse: B.D.S Energy!
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Big Dick Shota plays god and travels the multiverse, growing in god hood, collecting loyal followers and growing a passionate harem retinue of some lovely Priestess and goddess. (Warning story will contain some traps/femboys, loli, furry content. Mc is a god after all)
[This is a Story written by Chibi-Reaper over on Questionable Quest forms that I commissioned, check out his other works if you enjoy this story.]
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Nice story concept's but it's to much unknown things that some people don't know don't read that much. And normal bad writing my tip: use A.I to fix it like an rewrite of the words because it needs to be easily understandable to readers. even tho I can understand all of it because of my skill Lv and having an law that I must read it to the end even if the story is bad or good a lot of readers don't that that talent to wait and understand. you already have the tags going make an list of the story line the go with the flow that you pick as the tags says about the novel. you can keep going and you can just improve by time anyway.
man, this has almost everything a degenerate like me would want in a fanfic, and as a bonus, the story is good from a certain POV, and the writing seems to have gotten better based on previous reviews.
Boring politics. Chapter in and chapter out just lots of politics. This is realy not what I came here for.