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magmabeam

It is alright I am only on chapter 10 but the plot seems the same as haikyuu but different names. Like two players dont like each other and suddenly they are in the same team? Idk the story is still decent I like the grammar but the paragraphs need to be more spaced. It feels like someone pressed enter randomly on the paragraphs I'm not saying you copied them but it feels similar to haikyu. It seems you get good feedback so its good.

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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to check whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

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