/ Fantasy / Abyss Holder
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In the desolate urban sprawl, there existed a boy named Steven – a name as commonplace as the concrete beneath his worn-out shoes. His figure, terribly slender, bore the weight of days without sustenance, a stark reflection of the harsh life within the shadows of the towering skyscrapers. His disheveled appearance spoke of deprivation; his clothing, little more than rags haphazardly sewn together, clung to his meager frame.
Steven's features, though obscured by grime, revealed a haunting contrast. His black hair, adorned with a few rebellious red strands, framed a face marked by hardship. His pupils, black with a faint but discernible red tint, mirrored the desolation etched into his soul.
Staring into the familiar darkness that enveloped his existence, Steven couldn't help but voice the silent question that echoed in his mind, "When is this going to end?" The abyss, seemingly attuned to his despair, responded with a transformative touch. The surroundings, once stagnant and oppressive, began to shift and change before him, trapping him in a perpetual cycle of witnessing his own tragic past unfold.
Transported back to the age of six, Steven found himself amidst the warmth of familial joy, his parents' and his own expressions radiating happiness. Yet, even in the midst of this fleeting respite, the relentless cycle persisted, as if destiny reveled in replaying the moments that fueled the flames of his recurrent nightmares.
Fighting against the inexorable pull of his haunting memories, Steven, like a slum-bound ghost, yearned for an end to the perpetual loop. The city's towers cast long shadows over his struggle, and the contrast between the opulence above and his desolation below fueled his determination for a better life.
In the midst of this dire reality, Steven's path took an unexpected turn when he made the resolute decision to enlist in the military. The armed forces, a gateway to opportunity and escape from the slum's oppressive grasp, promised a chance to break free from the shackles of his impoverished past.
Little did Steven know that his journey would extend far beyond the familiar streets of the slums. The military, equipped with advanced technology and knowledge of other dimensions, opened doors to realms previously unimaginable. As he explored new universes and studied the cosmic mysteries, Steven's quest for a better life evolved into a cosmic odyssey, challenging not only the limits of his physical existence but also the boundaries of reality itself.
Throughout this transformative journey, Steven, emotionally reserved and scarred by the echoes of his past, found solace in the bonds forged amidst the trials of the military. Trust and love became the cornerstones of his emotional awakening, as he learned to unveil the layers of vulnerability hidden beneath his stoic exterior.
As Steven navigates the interwoven tapestry of action, tragedy, romance, sci-fi, adventure, and dimensions, the narrative expands to reflect the complexity of his existence. The story, no longer confined to the limitations of the slums, becomes a symphony of emotions, echoing the resilient spirit of a young man determined to transcend the shadows of his past and embrace the limitless possibilities that unfold across the cosmic expanse.
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The first space related novel I've read and I must say, it's amazing. The writing style doesn't look like that of a beginner, the story is well planned and easy going. Just the right amount of suspense and thrill. Good job author!!
This novel is really good, the story is captivating right from the start. the Main character has a good background and not your typical past that MC was abandoned by his parents or is an orphan because his parents died in a car accident, the writing quality has a few grammatical mistakes, but of course, considering the author is new it's no problem. the story binds you from the first chapter only. I am really excited about him getting strong and taking revenge on those mother fu**ers in the future . Am definitely waiting for more chapters.
The story is interisting the MC has a interisting backstory. the concept of mana and futures-tic concept is good the story is kind of slow at the moment and it might get into pace soon i think.. the romantic bits are good the author did forget to add some details about the cataracts in between form what iian tell after reading. bit over all its a good read. i am waiting for the future chapters its getting interisting
I don't know what to say but keep up the good work everything is great writing is very good and easy to understand the characters are beautiful written this is the thing I wanna read
I am sorry if I skimmed over the first chapter, but I found it really mysterious even at the beginning. And I love a mystery in the story. -The writing quality is readable and understandable. For someone who is dumb like me in processing words, I can read it. -The stability of updates... As an author who fails, I don't really mind the stability as long as you update and upload a chapter. -The story development, I will still have to read more, but I don't have time for that as an author trying to achieve something. However, looking at the number of chapters, there is a story. And that's what matters. -Character design and world background could be labeled as one, but my thoughts on it depends on the writing quality. So its as good as five stars. Good luck and God bless.
Started reading it a few days ago and I found it to be a real interesting read. So much thought process has been put in to create the world. The way MC has been portrayed makes you feel sorry for him at times but the way he rises to the occasion fill the heart with pride. Keep writing author.
I didn't read the story yet . I'm wondering what +18 mean!! Like describing a s*x scene or is for gore?? Because if it is gore i will be interested in reading it otherwise not my type
I love it, this is really good the character design is great too, I'd give it a 4.2 rating would give it 5 but it's not yet that good but i expect something good
I have been reading novels on pirated sites until now because I couldn't pay to get the coins on this or any other platform. but now I can Woooooo anyways I started reading this novel because I liked the cover but I love the story, It has a unique concept, so I want more of these chapters so Writer-Sama keeps writing this novel.
I haven't read many novels yet but I like the unique concept of the novel and I think it has a lot of potential if anyone is reading this novel I know the first few chapters may seem like they are not that good but after a few chapters, it gets really good so give it a read.
hello everyone BlackRaven_ here I hope everyone who is reading this novel would love it, I want to create a story that would be something I can be proud of at the end of this story, or my life, there are many things that I want to do in this story and make it into something everyone looks up to as one of the top stories on this platform. I hope that you all will like the story and support it. [img=coins][img=exp][img=fp]