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The wheels of fate spun. The lives of two victims of greater power entwine.
The blood of the dragons meets the child of Elder blood.
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*Slow paced*
*3rd person focus*
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Knowledge of Elder scrolls+Witcher lore is recommended for some descriptions or developments.
For example, Nirn (the planet) has two moons called Masser and Secunda. The sun is called Magnus and so on...
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First world- Skyrim
Second world- The Witcher 3
Third- Middle-Earth?
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Any and all criticism is not only welcome but encouraged. The only way I improve is by trial and error, so your comments/reviews are extremely valuable to me.
This is my first written work after all...
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The art used in the cover was labelled as free to use.
However, if that's not the case please let me know.
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Gotta say, I don't do Reviews on anything but this book is great, I would suggest it to anyone who is lookingnfor a good FF to read sadly enough I went through the chapters like a sponge duebto how good they are
Main Character is half elf and the Dragonborn from Skyrim(Elder Scrolls) world, and the Female Lead is Ciri from The Witcher world. to me they are a perfect match, and together I can see them travel together to other worlds when they solve their worlds own problems.
It won't be a criticism but a compliment. I love skyrim and the witcher, but unfortunately the fanfics about these worlds are almost nil, and the few that have either been dropped, or are just too horrible. You're doing a great job on character development, don't mind the comments that talk about slow development, don't rush an artist when he's working. If you feel that 50, 100, 150 or more chapters are necessary for the story to develop your way, then just do it.
It’s great so far. I especially liked the fact you showed people who aren’t lovers or barely even friends can still be nice to each other. Something this site lacks in my opinion because “emotions make men weak” or whatever these insecure boys say. The only improvement I can suggest is to focus on worldbuilding a little more but then again that’s very minor considering it’s set in Skyrim.
..I love it.. the plot is good the story line is perfect with a bit of fun and plot a bit rushed but all too perfectly narrated... good job author keep it up keep going and love it sending you energy..🥰
my favorite fic in Webnovel right now, I gave it one, yes, but what about second review? hoping for this fic to continue until it's complete.
I absolutely love this book it is exactly what I’ve been looking for. A story about a crossover between 2 of my favourite franchises that is well written and structured. The conversations are natural and the setting and development is done perfectly. Thank you for this story and please keep up your great work ! :)
It's a great book so far can't wait to see the stuff later that will happen as they travel around skyrim and also get to the dlc's. I am curious to also see the next arcs after everything's done in skyrim to see if they go to the other provinces around Tamriel and the arcs in the other worlds. Stay "Evil" author.
Interesting can't wait to see what you'll do with the story.................................................................................
Interesting can't wait to see what you do with it also looking forward to cyberpunk being the second world. keep up the amazing work
idk why its taken me so long to write a review. But anyways this fic is in like the top 1% of fics on this app or anywhere else tbh. the characters are great the interactions everything really like mc and ciri they a cool duo.
As of chapter 20 (I think it was) I like pretty much everything about the novel. Haven't seen any grammar mistakes (not that I notice those anymore) or any glaring inconsistencies. I like the plot and how it's going so far. The only thing I don't really want to happen is for there to be a three way relationship between MC x Ciri x Serana, if there really ends up being a relationship between Serana I'd rather Ciri didn't get involved in it, not a great big fan of harem, open relationships and yuri.
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great, this wonderful story is finally back.............................................................................................................................
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an interesting take on the old elder blood world, hoping fanfic I'm excited to see where the author takes it.
Shameless.....Why not right? I'm new so all advice and criticism is very welcome :) ....................................................................................................................