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An Australian man dies and ends up meeting who was responsible for his early death and ends up in Westeros as a near immortal death machine with a plan…..to stay away from all the bullshit……and relax and recover from a harrowing experience
I don’t own game of thrones or warhammer 40k
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disclaimer, i stopped reading at chapter 3, so maybe it gets better or gets worse. oh boy, here we go... let's start with the good stuff first: 1. you're brave enough to write a got + warhammer 40k fanfic 2. warhammer 40k, what can i say? that's always a plus 3. grammar and formating is okay, could improve a bit though. bad ones: 1. as a fanfic, it's quite decent, but as a game of thrones fanfic, it's not. the first alarm would be that the author mixed warhammer 40k with got, which, imo, doesn't make sense, because of the power leveling difference of both universes. GOT just doesn't mix well with "OP" and no struggles, it'll get boring really fast because the premise of the world is the politics and the intense war. 2. Catelyn bashing is overdone and annoying, why are fanfic authors hating on her while picturing Tyrion as a saint? just stop. 3. again, starting in the north, it's overdone and unoriginal. i understand that people liked the north and got focuses a lot on there, but come on dude, it's boring. people either start at the north, or eastern essos where they're far away from GOT plot except daenrys's in webnovel for some reason... 4. a LOT of exposition. if it's lore then it's fine like in the GOT books, but summarising MC's relationship with people in one paragraph? that ain't it. SHOW, dont TELL, atleast show a small scene where MC bonded with said character... like in chapter 2 where author wrote that MC "saved" Ned multiple times so he is in his good graces, i facepalmed hard and made me lose interest quite a bit... how are we supposed to care about the relationship between the two if you said that MC and Ned are in "good graces" but you never showed any evidence that the MC had helped him. sorry for the rant, but I just hate it when authors do this. the entire chapter 2 just frustrates me, you could mention all his abilities in an auxilliary chapter and made another chapter about his backstory, showing ACTUAL SCENES instead of boring exposition... 5.oh and author seems like he wants to keep the plot canon for the reason that the MC wants a peaceful life and "recover from the harrowing experience", yet he still followed Ned Stark to the Tower, and still LET THE OTHER FIVE COMPANIONS DIE, if you're a reader you'll probably miss this since it's only explained in ONE SINGLE PARAGRAPH. if he had just saved Lyanna and Rhaegar earlier, who knows, maybe the Game of Thrones would've never happened and he would've have his "peaceful life" overall, decent for a webnovel fanfic as it suits their wish fulfillment taste, but imo, a below average game of thrones fanfic.
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Excellent intro chapters on this novel author alreadygot hyped up coming from the perspectiveof a free.reader. The story is great and exciting. I hope you continue the story until its reaches its end. Praying for your good mental health 😁 For warrrrrr
This one of those stories that just fits. the authors way of story telling is smooth and compelling. you'll not want to put it down. also should check out his other stuff. you don't even hafta like or be familiar with the world's there in, the authors just that good.
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Where have all the good men gone And where are all the gods? Where's the streetwise Hercules To fight the rising odds? Isn't there a white knight upon a fiery steed Late at night, I toss and I turn And I dream of what I need I need a hero I'm holding out for a hero 'til the end of the night He's gotta be strong, and he's gotta be fast And he's gotta be fresh from the fight I need a hero I'm holding out for a hero 'til the morning light He's gotta be sure, and it's gotta be soon And he's gotta be larger than life Larger than life Somewhere after midnight In my wildest fantasy Somewhere, just beyond my reach There's someone reaching back for me Racing on the thunder And rising with the heat It's gonna take a Superman to sweep me off my feet, yeah I need a hero I'm holding out for a hero 'til the end of the night He's gotta be strong, and he's gotta be fast And he's gotta be fresh from the fight I need a hero I'm holding out for a hero 'til the morning light He's gotta be sure, and it's gotta be soon And he's gotta be larger than life I need a hero I'm holding out for a hero 'til the end of the night Up where the mountains meet the heavens above Out where the lightning splits the sea I could swear there is someone, somewhere watching me Through the wind and the chill and the rain And the storm and the flood I can feel his approach like a fire in my blood (Like a fire in my blood, like a fire in my blood Like a fire in my blood, like a fire in my blood, blood) I need a hero I'm holding out for a hero 'til the end of the night He's gotta be strong, and he's gotta be fast And he's gotta be fresh from the fight I need a hero I'm holding out for a hero 'til the morning light He's gotta be sure, and it's gotta be soon And he's gotta be larger than life I need a hero I'm holding out for a hero 'til the end of the night He's gotta be strong, and he's gotta be fast And he's gotta be fresh from the fight I need a hero I'm holding out for a hero 'til the morning light He's gotta be sure, and it's gotta be soon And he's gotta be larger than life I need a hero I'm holding out for a hero 'til the end of the night
Author has smooth storytelling and good descriptions of the things that the MC does. The only thing wrong with the book is that it needs more chapters!! Keep up the good work man, I am enjoying everything you write!
i like it hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Update stability was good but right now it stopped, I hope it will continue other than that I could say this sh** is pretty good, right now we're pretty much settled down while also killed some people here and there, I'm waiting for the big fight to happen
This is really good piece of work. A lot of jokes and strategy kinda feeling. the only drawback is likited number of chapters ! Put a bloody penal collar they use in penal battalions and make him work ! I want five chapters today and few hundred tomorrow !
Normally I don't like Kingdom Building stories but so far(12 chapters) this story is a blast and harlious. The MC has a good balance of seriousness and crazy
not sure about the release rate thus 4 star on that. it is a refreshing GOT ff for me. just being straight forward . it's just starting up but so far, I enjoyed reading.
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really liking the story and everything else i dont really know what to say except if you wanted to read a beast space marine in got this is for you. the grammar and dialogue is really good also
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Once again really enjoying this story just like you’re other ones however I would suggest maybe a year or so timeskip just to the point things are properly up and running. Or just keep it the same as now I’ll read anyways so good job Author!
hahaha i thoroughly loved your novel. still halfway through but me getting giggles coz of it. well done! thank you for this masterpiece! been a while i read a good one. ^_^
A very good novel with a nice take on the GOT as a whole. I like how his wish has been granted and how it changed him, as I have read in many novels where the MC asks for something similar and they get it without a change in their thinking. I hope that you keep on updating more chapters.
This had a lot of potential honestly but again too bad that we may never get more chapters and see how he interacts with the other main characters
My second time reading this book and i still enjoy it sad to see that it has been dropped
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