/ Anime & Comics / A SHINOBI IN PARADISE
概要
Shiv was a 22 yr old otaku with a medicore life.... He suddenly gets hit by a truck and goes to void where he meets rob and gets his 2 wishes for not doing anything and thus saving the world then he gets reincarnated in the world of second coming of gluttony but with a twist since this is seol jihu's first life Our MC is born with a tenseigan a lightning lightning devil fruit and fateless soul...
First world TSCOG (Early life before cannon)
Second World Naruto
タグ
-- 推薦
ランキング 
-- 推薦
チケット あなたも好きかも
8レビュー
- テキストの品質
- アップデートの安定性
- ストーリー展開
- キャラクターデザイン
- 世界の背景
あなたの考えを他の人と共有してください
レビューを書く
Well this is the first TSCOG fanfic so I hope the author doesn't drops it. 🤷🤷🤷🤷🤷🤷🤷🤷🤷🤷🤷🤷🤷🤷 🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅
which manhwa is this ? I don't remember that why I m asking . someone please ? ...hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmhmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
I can’t say its the best story but the author does a good job developing relashionships and carachter growth, action is lacking a little, there is also cringe moments, if you can look past these negative points i would recommend giving this ff a try.
There are very few grammatical and spelling mistakes... story devlopement is quite slow and a bit too fast in chapter 25 . Character designs are good too though description of their appearance isn't very clear but their attitude personality are written in a good way... World background is obviously good since TSCOG is one of the best LN out there....
Nice fanfic though the story is slow but writing is good. !!!!!!3!3!3!3!3!3!3!3!3!3!3!3!3!!3!3!3!3!3!3!3!3!3!3!3!3!(3!3!3!3(3(3(3((3(3(3(3(3(3)
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how many mc girl now ? I need to know before read cause in harem confirm chapter only have 2 harem name and that's not even harem thought . Men that's why you get not respond cause when harem novel they will see candidate of harem member before read and now they see only 2 member ? how they want to read .
Nice fanfic author, recommended ░░░░░▄▄▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▄▄░░░░░ ░░░░█░░░░░░░░░░░░░█░░░░ ░░░█░░░░░░░░░░▄▄▄░░█░░░ ░░░█░░▄▄▄░░▄░░███░░█░░░ ░░░▄█░▄░░░▀▀▀░░░▄░█▄░░░ ░░░█░░▀█▀█▀█▀█▀█▀░░█░░░ ░░░▄██▄▄▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▄▄██▄░░░ ░▄█░█▀▀█▀▀▀█▀▀▀█▀▀█░█▄░ ▄▀░▄▄▀▄▄▀▀▀▄▀▀▀▄▄▀▄▄░▀▄ █░░░░▀▄░█▄░░░▄█░▄▀░░░░█ ░▀▄▄░█░░█▄▄▄▄▄█░░█░▄▄▀░ ░░░▀██▄▄███████▄▄██▀░░░ ░░░████████▀████████░░░ ░░▄▄█▀▀▀▀█░░░█▀▀▀▀█▄▄░░ ░░▀▄▄▄▄▄▀▀░░░▀▀▄▄▄▄▄▀░