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75% A Light User in Teyvat / Chapter 3: –Modifications–

章 3: –Modifications–

Sorry for disappearing after only two chapters! I didn't know if I wanted to go through with the plot I had thought out beforehand so I decided to take the time to actually think it through. I didn't change anything about Naoise since I really like his character, but I did make some modifications after reading through the comments and thinking about stuff myself.

First: Niamh will be her name as a mortal, like Venti for Barbatos or Zhongli for Morax. Her name as an Archon is Vine, based off of Ars Goetia. Thank you to whoever left that comment.

Second: I changed Goddess of what she is. Before it was the Goddess of Light, but since she is the "Lys" Archon, it was redundant. After a bit of thinking, I decided on Karmic Retribution. I thought it made sense since light is somewhat related to good and justice and blablabla.

Third: There will be no other reincarnators as it was first supposed to be. Firstly because I thought about what I like to read and realized that multiple reincarnators are annoying. Second because that would force me to create more OCs and I didn't want to. Third, someone left a comment about not liking it, which made me realize I agreed with him.

That is the list of changes that I made. Short, but it will greately affect the plot of the story. From now on, you can expect at least one or two chapters a week, but no regular updates since I am attending college and I want to accumulate as much credit as possible.

Once again, sorry for disappearing and I hope you enjoy the story that is to come guys!


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