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Warning: This story is bad.
After a tragic death of which I didn't write, Ren's soul stumbled upon Death's Realm.
....Now he's wedded to her and is now in Remnant? What the fuck?!
1st World RWBY: Complete
2nd World: Scissor Seven: Ongoing(Sadly)
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Overall it's good (for me) even though it only has 4 chapters currently and just keep up the good work ......................................................................................................................................
I'm giving my honest review of my story. The writing quality is bad, and seems to lack actual motivation. Update Quality is ok. Story Development right now is weird. When they start travelling, not even that far in to it, and Ruby has already *Spoiler* It's seems a little to fast-paced. Character design is not doing it. He's barely shown interacting with other characters, apart from the System and Ruby. There are some small talks between Clarent, but that's it. World Background.... Heh.
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I'd say if you run into this review and seem to have some interest in reading, I reccomend shutting off brain functions and simply diving in. Good way to spend half an hour after being burnt out from other stories