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DISCLAIMER: I don't own anything besides the name of the protagonist. Persona belongs to whoever created it. Also, the No One 17 and Under Admitted is because of the excessive swearing, dark themes and not for the possible (but unlikely) lemons.
Shin Yuuta, who unknowingly had caused world devastation in another timeline, had been sent to the sea of souls to cleanse the influence a malevolent entity, composed from humanity's evil thoughts, had over him.
Wielding the gifts he had received from his body's previous host and a certain mask-wearing being, it is up for our protagonist to make sure history doesn't repeat itself.
P.S: The pic I used for cover isn't mine either.
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Well i am reviewing cause i think there aren't many presona ff and you can improve the grammar and dialogue like some time i don't know who is speaking but the overall everything is good hope you don't drop and keep uploading. Keep up the good work.[img=update][img=update]
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I recommend playing the game instead of reading this 'fanfic'. This is just new game+ with some extra tidbits. Sadge, I thought this was going to be a genuine persona 5 fanfic.
ion know bro. this kinda good. obviously stuff like grammar and etc can improve cause no one is perfect. but this is pretty good for your first book. UP TOP!
If not for the weak start and the brief hiatus this story would be five stars. The author has some very obvious passion for the series and solid writing chops. I really recommend you muscle through the first dozen or so chapters because once Shin gets some personality he becomes a hugely likable protagonist. Word of warning though, this story becomes a Fate crossover out of the blue when the protagonist encounters Shirou Emiya. As of yet nothing has come of it, but the protagonist is preparing for battling it out in Type-Moon. Also the author toes the line for all you harem seekers and anti harem retards. He seems to be skilled enough at character interaction that he could pull off a harem without it feeling bland. I think that is really all that matters in that flame war I seem to come across on this platform so often. You can either pull it off or you can't.
mira bro simplemente por ser un Fanfic de la saga de videojuegos de persona ya merece la pena y además de qué la premisa es bien deliberada y espero que no lo dropees.
Door-kun crossover when author?!......….............. ............................................... .... ......... . . .
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Best Persona Fanfic on here I have attempted to read others, there are too little variety, content, and this one far outstrips them. @@@@@@@@@@
Just realized i have not made a review for this art piece yet. Ill make an actual review later on but if you wanna know whether this story is good or not then it is. Should definitely read it.
It's pretty good _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
pretty similar to basic persona 5, but with changes just not at the first like 3 chapters so it's exactly how you expect a fanfic to be. the same story with some minor, and major changes it's dope af p.s I haven't finished what you've posted, but I do have a question who's the love interest/interests?
Not as bad as I was expecting when it came to writing quality. I also liked and look forward to this new story where the protagonist has some foresight before some key story events. Interested to see what could happen because of these new actions. Overall, pretty solid.
I like the fact that you are writing a Persona ff. The way combat happens might need a bit more description, since most Person fans have only played the games, but it’s only the first dozen chapers for me and i am sure things will change in the future. The subtle changes in the story so far are good. Saving Shiho is a definite plus and not just avoiding the suicide scene completely was good. Only problem is how much off the dialogue is coming directly from the game. But i do understand that it is the tutorial part of the game, so creative freedom is limited. Hoping more off-script interactions will happen in the future. Persona 5 Royal and breaking a certain piece of shits arm was greatly appreciated. Hope you keep writting and don’t get tired since this is a good read.
I really wasn't expecting this to be as good as it is. sure there are ways to improve but it great none the less............................
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Sam great fucking work bro i don't read game fanfics but you did it you madlad you fucking made it give yourself a prize as you fucking did it