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Shawn a fan of anything duel monsters dies and wakes up in Marvel with a mission find the scattered millennium items and keep the secret of duel monsters and shadow games hidden.
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Grammar could be improved, everything else is good I guess. So faf better than your kaiju fic at least.
Writing is decent some errors here and their could be better just need some editing didn't like how you just dropped the character in like that could have done better their but thats my opinion. the story development little too fast slow down a bit is what I advise. updates don't care as long as you just don't drop it out of nowhere. world background common but I really don't care. now for character design don't make him gullible, don't tell anyone he's a transmigrate or reincarnated person and don't make him too trusting I rather then mc have his secrets then him tell random characters everything about himself.
I'm giving 5 stars cause this idea's original (not many, if not, any stories about force users in Marvel). Also, because it's a different entity, not really the force from Star Wars, you can make it do things that Jedi and Sith can't: like making constructs from it {exactly like the Lanterns from DC} or converting to other kinds of energy and creating other kinds [like shinobi with their elemental chakras (fire, wind, water, earth, lightning etc.)] or like the speed force where the force user draws energy from the force, the more energy drawn, the faster the force user(s) is/are. You can also keep most of the force abilities like the Jedi mind control trick, telekinesis, etc. So many possibilities for this new Force-concept you can make. Can't wait to read it.
I didn't expect this story to good. But the author make me LOVE his story . Keep up the good work author. This for me is a gem.
so far this is one of the most interesting fics I've ever read it has so much potential and I'm eager to read more personally I'd like to see the mc play with a crusadia deck as they are my favorite archetype but I also want to see more items that he brings out I also want to see him send doctor doom to the shadow relm
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interesting I like the idea and can't wait to read more hope this doesn't get dropped
It's a great story and it's barely beginning, so I can't figure out what's gonna happen next. I love what it has up to at the moment and when I mean up to at the moment, I mean the 1st 11 chapters because that's where I am right now when I commenting this.
please, continue, I really liked the story mainly because there are not many yugioh stories with Marvel even more that its story has a good narrative and a great backstory with the protagonist having to look for the millennium items
me encanta la historia hay poco de este tipo sobre yu gi oh y me gusta mucho el contexto que se le esta dando y las posibilidades que tiene a futuro para desarrollarse
Great story and character too . I love play yu-gi-oh! cards, games, and watching the tv show as well so please don't forget to put more chapters in the future !