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A Debauchery Life In DxD

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Gray The Soul Immortal, got betrayed by his own wife- The New Immortal Lady Fate.
So he became a soul again.
...But the thing is he isn't depressed.
Do you know why? He died 69 deaths by his own wives. 69 wives too in each life now its 70 deaths and wives.
But he still got hurt so he won't get a new wife by 1000 years or more.
Immortals are cold, they all hardy trust each other. Gray knew what he did is stupid. Getting a relationship to an Immortal?
So he became a soul.
He can create a new body but he won't.
This time he will reincarnated to mortals but he have to find their home first so he wandered 10,000 years to find their World.
there's many Worlds but Gray want something interesting. Something new that will pique his curiosity. and he finally found the World that pique his curiosity, Well he wasted 10,000 years but it's really worth it for him.
Now it's time to decide what kind of life he will live from now on. Something life he will be happy and loved.. But what type of life is that?(He chooses what kind of life he will do in chapter 2. Well the Title of the novel says it.)

I'll upload chapters if I'm in the mood or not busy.

My writing might become bland, the characters interaction is like an emotionless talk, the chapters might not be interesting so don't expect to much. It's my first novel after all. But don't worry I will get better. :3

The cover is not mine, if the owner want's to take it down I will take it down.

The first 1-4 chapters are bad but don't worry, I got better at chapter 5.

All of the chapters are 1k+ words except the first chapters.

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CarolineInPajama

I should make chapters longer... What about 1k to 1.5k words each chapter from now on?

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CarolineInPajama

Here's my own review for this novel. I don't like reading my novel. I feel nothing so-- 3 stars The updates? I update 2 chapters or 3 chapters mostly. Every day Story Development? Do you enjoy reading your own story? No, right? So I will rate 3 stars. Character Design? I like manipulative main character if he/she isn't too dark. And I won't make the Mc like that. 4 STARs World Background? It's DxD! 5 stars.

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CarolineInPajama

The first 1-4 chapters are might be bad... But don't worry I think in 5 chapters are okay now?

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AshGod7

It's good and readable but there is still room for improvement. One of the many normal books on webnovel which you can read to pass time. This is what is currently think.

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CarolineInPajama

Gimme reviews! I really wanted to know how do you think of my novel. And no, don't just review and add 5 stars or lower if you don't have explanation or else I will delete it. For now I won't delete every review you guys do except, low rating with no explanation. I really need reviews!

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