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A cripple in medieval world

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作者: Pham_Minh_Khue

4.74 (13 レビュー結果)

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This is the first time I write a novel in English. I’m just a historical nerd wanting to create a beautiful story.
It’ll be great if you guys can tell me about my grammatical mistakes
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This is the story of a modern man reincarnated into a medieval, fictional, and fantasy world.
Although he is a cripple, he has some special power that can help him to develop his land and hammer his legend into history.
I’m inspired by the legendary tale of Ivar the Boneless.
=.= Enjoy!
My discord server: https://discord.gg/wqVVfeDr

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Pham_Minh_Khue

Hey, it's author.I wil shamelessly rate my story five stars. I know that I am still inexperience so if you don't like my book, just rate it as your will. I welcome any suggestions that can help me increase my story. Have a nice day everyone.

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YoDaddy

It is a good story, his ability is strong but not ridiculously OP. I can see a good future for this book, as long as the author doesn't drop it.

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seniyah84

Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leorichard2021*@*outlook.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

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Antonio_sShort

Pretty good thE writing quality is almost perfect but everything Else is a okay i hope you dont add harEm or love In the stroy it Would make it bad

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Kriegsman_Alex

It's a good book the only problem that is not very serious is that the author just likes little too much the Japanese weapons. ........................

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LaziestDragon

This novel is a good kingdom-building novel with a cheat but it is not ridiculously powerful nor does it give the MC a lot of combat strength a few grammar mistakes here and there but apart from that a solid read. MC seems to be smart and has taken some losses against enemies. I recommend people to read it and if you don't like it drop it but honestly its seems to be a solid read and with stable updates too.

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raffi_pasyadana

nice one I love it so much please keep updating it[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

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98_Games

any update??? pls continue!!! we are all waiting

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Uesuz
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I like the plot of the story but I feel like the story go by too fast sometime. I don't really bother about the character depth so I won't say anything about that ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

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nameyelus

Enjoying the story feel that it’s going to explore more of the world and that your mc is a combination of Ragnar who wanted to explore new places and was patient and ivar who love fighting and wanted power

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